Name— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and direct: start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Avoid repetition (e.g. "normal" repeated) and unclear phrasing like "not on the normal format". Use more precise vocabulary such as "usual" or "unusual spelling."

예시: I find it fairly easy to remember names if they have a common or familiar spelling. However, if a name has an unusual spelling or uncommon structure, I often struggle to recall it because it doesn't match patterns I'm used to.

제안: Provide a clear structure: topic sentence stating your methods, then give specific strategies with linking words. Avoid short fragmented sentences and unclear endings. Mention concrete mnemonic techniques (visual association, repetition) to show a variety of valid methods and richer vocabulary.

예시: I use several strategies to remember names. For example, when someone introduces themselves I repeat the name once or twice aloud and connect it to a visual feature like their hairstyle. Also, I mentally link uncommon names to a familiar word or image so I can recall them later.

제안: Your answer is clear but could be improved by a concise topic sentence and one supporting reason using linking words. Avoid awkward phrasing like "very close to me then it might make me upset"; be more definite and give a brief example to illustrate when it would upset you.

예시: Generally I feel neutral if someone forgets my name, because it happens to everyone. However, if a close friend or colleague forgets my name, I would feel a bit hurt because it suggests they haven't been paying attention to me.

제안: Good direct response. Improve by tightening phrasing and using linking words to contrast present and past (e.g. "however", "on the other hand"). Avoid grammatical errors like "which whom" and use "whom" or "who" correctly. Provide a brief specific example to make it more vivid.

예시: I rarely forget names of people I see regularly because repetition helps me remember. However, I often forget the names of acquaintances from many years ago whom I haven't seen for a long time, such as a former classmate I met only once.

× But I really find it difficult when the spelling of a name is not on the normal format I would say.

✓ But I really find it difficult when the spelling of a name is not in the normal format, I would say.

Use of preposition: 'on the normal format' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in the normal format'. This is a preposition choice issue related to how we describe something conforming to a format. Suggestion: use 'in the normal format' or 'in the usual format'. Note: Classified here as 'Verb in the present participle form' because the list did not include a direct preposition-only type matching better; the core fix is changing the preposition.

× I remember people's name.

✓ I remember people's names.

The noun should agree in number with 'people's' (plural possessive). 'People' is plural, so the possessed noun should be plural: 'names'. Suggestion: use 'people's names' when referring to more than one person's name.

× Based on different ways.

✓ I remember people's names in different ways.

Fragment: 'Based on different ways.' is a sentence fragment lacking a subject and verb. It must be connected to the main clause. Suggestion: combine with the previous sentence or rewrite as a complete sentence: 'I remember people's names in different ways.'

× One is if I see them personally and they have introduced themselves to me then I will definitely remember if it's a common name, but if it's really difficult then if it's different.

✓ One way is: if I meet them in person and they introduce themselves to me, I will definitely remember their name if it's common, but if it is unusual or difficult, I might not remember it.

Awkward and run-on structure with redundant conditional clauses and unclear pronoun references. Fix involves clear clause sequencing and consistent tense: use present simple for habitual actions ('meet', 'introduce') and modal 'might' for possibility. Suggestion: break into clearer clauses and replace 'different' with 'unusual' or 'difficult' to convey meaning.

× I will feel neutral about it unless they are very close to me then it might make me upset.

✓ I feel neutral about it unless they are very close to me; then it might make me upset.

Tense consistency: original mixes 'will feel' with present habitual context. Use present simple 'I feel' for general states; keep 'might' for possibility. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual feelings and 'might' for hypothetical reactions.

× But if they're not someone that I get to interact with on a day-to-day basis then it's fine.

✓ But if they're not someone I interact with on a day-to-day basis, then it's fine.

Unnecessary 'that' and awkward phrasing. Simplify relative clause and use present simple 'interact' for habitual action. Suggestion: remove 'that' and use 'I interact with'.

× It's very rare that I forget people's names, especially if I interact with them on a day-to-day basis.

✓ It's very rare for me to forget people's names, especially if I interact with them on a day-to-day basis.

Use of 'that' after 'rare' is acceptable but 'for me to forget' is more natural in this context. Also maintains present tense for habitual situations. Suggestion: prefer 'rare for me to' or 'rare that I' both acceptable; 'for me to' is slightly more natural here.

× But if there's someone from the past which whom I really don't get to talk to most of the time, then most probably I'll forget their names.

✓ But if there's someone from the past whom I really don't get to talk to most of the time, then I'll most probably forget their name.

Pronoun and relative pronoun errors: 'which whom' is incorrect; use 'whom' for people (or 'who' in informal speech). Also number agreement: 'someone' is singular, so 'name' should be singular. 'Most probably' placement is awkward; 'I'll most probably' or 'most probably I'll' is better. Suggestion: use 'whom' or 'who' and match singular 'someone' with singular 'name'.