Name— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Avoid redundancy (e.g., "I remember permanently their name"). Use linking words if adding detail.

예시: Yes, it's easy for me to remember people's names. For example, when someone tells me their name I repeat it once or twice in my head, which helps me recall it later.

제안: Give a clear method with coherent structure and correct grammar. Use a topic sentence describing your method, then briefly explain how it works using linking words (e.g., "for example", "so"). Avoid confusing phrases and unnecessary repetition.

예시: I remember names by connecting them with the person's face. For example, when I meet someone I picture their name written on their face and repeat it silently, so I can recall it the next time I see them.

제안: Give a direct emotional response first, then explain with a specific example. Correct grammar and choose appropriate words (e.g., "shocked", "special"). Keep it to two or three sentences and use a linking word to connect idea and example.

예시: I feel surprised and pleased when someone who isn't close to me remembers my name. For example, if a shop assistant remembers my name after one meeting, I feel special and appreciated.

제안: Answer directly, then clarify exceptions with a clear reason. Use correct grammar and linking words like "however" or "but". Be specific about situations when you might forget and how you fix it.

예시: No, I don't usually forget names. However, I sometimes forget names of people I meet briefly, but if I look at their face or speak to them again I quickly remember their name.

× Yeah, that's easy for me I know everyone's name when I talk to someone if they tell me their name so I remember permanently their name

✓ Yeah, that's easy for me. I know everyone's name when I talk to someone if they tell me their name, so I remember their name permanently.

Run-on sentence and missing punctuation caused subject-verb flow issues and unclear clause boundaries. Added periods and a comma to separate independent clauses and moved the adverb 'permanently' after the object for natural word order. No change to tense or subject-verb agreement beyond punctuation.

× Oh, that's not about so called tips and drinks that just that's just a habit if someone tells me their name so my mind catch their face with their names letters so when I see someone so I remember their name so that's easy

✓ Oh, it's not about so-called tips or tricks; it's just a habit. If someone tells me their name, my mind links their face with the letters of their name, so when I see them I remember their name. It's that simple.

Multiple issues: incorrect word choice ('drinks' should be 'tricks'), punctuation, run-on sentences, incorrect verb forms ('catch' -> 'links'), and repeated conjunctions 'so'. Rewrote into clearer sentences, corrected 'so-called', used 'links' to show mental association, changed 'their names letters' to 'the letters of their name', and replaced 'someone' with 'them' for smoother reference.

× I never shopped when it's someone in my family or friends but if anon called my name and remember so that's make me shock and feel happy and feels like special

✓ I am never shocked when someone in my family or my friends can't remember my name, but if a stranger calls my name and remembers it, it surprises me and makes me feel happy and special.

Many pronoun and word-choice errors: 'shopped' -> 'shocked', incorrect tense and subject forms, 'anon' -> 'a stranger', missing auxiliary verbs, and awkward phrasing. Replaced with correct pronouns and verbs, ensured subject-verb agreement ('it surprises me' -> 'it surprises me' and 'makes me feel'), and clarified meaning.

× No, as well, but some of people when I meet them very low capacity so I forgot their name, but if I see their face and and look into their eyes. So I remember their name very easily. As the day I never found it.

✓ No, not usually. However, with some people who have difficulty remembering names, I forget theirs when I first meet them, but if I see their face and look into their eyes, I remember their name very easily. I have never had a problem with this during the day.

Several errors: 'some of people' -> 'some people' or 'some people who have difficulty', awkward phrase 'very low capacity' replaced with 'who have difficulty remembering names', incorrect tense and fragments fixed, duplicated 'and', and unclear final sentence clarified to 'I have never had a problem with this during the day.' Adjusted articles and word choice for natural English and corrected sentence fragments into full sentences.