Name— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more grammatically accurate, concise and directly answer the question. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + short reason), then add one specific supporting detail. Avoid irrelevant information and reduce repetition.

예시: Yes, I find it fairly easy to remember people’s names because I held a school council position and met many students regularly. For example, as council president I spoke with classmates every day, which helped me associate names with faces and roles.

제안: Organize your answer: give a clear method first, then one or two specific techniques. Use linking words (for example, because, when) and avoid unclear phrases. Correct grammar (possessives, plurals) and avoid repetition.

예시: I usually remember names by linking them to a distinctive feature or context. For example, I might think “Tom with the white shirt” or remember someone I worked with on a project, because spending time together helped me connect the name with a face.

제안: Give a direct emotional response first, then provide a brief reason or example. Keep sentences complete and avoid trailing off. Use linking words like however or because to make your point clear.

예시: I usually feel indifferent when someone forgets my name because there are so many people to meet these days. However, if we spend more time together I expect they will remember me, so it’s not a big problem.

제안: Answer directly (Yes/No), then give a concise reason and one specific supporting detail. Improve grammar and avoid filler words (like, yeah). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I often do because I meet many new people and it’s hard to remember everyone. For instance, I make new friends frequently at university, so I can forget older acquaintances’ names unless I meet them regularly.

× To be honest, I think that it's easy to remember people name and was school council president and I had to take care of many people in my school so I remember them and know them.

✓ To be honest, I think that it's easy to remember people's names. I was the school council president, and I had to take care of many students at my school, so I remembered and got to know them.

Errors: 'people name' needs possessive and plural ('people's names') because names belong to people and there are many; run-on sentence and tense inconsistency ('was school council president' needs article and subject: 'I was the school council president'); 'take care of many people in my school' more natural as 'many students at my school'; 'so I remember them and know them' should be past tense to match 'was' and 'had' ('remembered and got to know them'). Suggestion: break long sentence into two, use possessive + plural for names, include articles, and keep verb tenses consistent.

× In my opinion, I must remember because his face and his white it is easy to know them because it's different from other people's and if we spend time together it will easily easily for remember people's names.

✓ In my opinion, I remember them because their faces and features are distinctive, so it is easy to recognize them. Also, if we spend time together, it becomes easier to remember people's names.

Errors: 'must remember' is inappropriate modal here; use simple present 'remember' for habitual fact. 'his face and his white' is unclear and incorrect; use 'their faces and features' or 'their faces and distinctive features'. 'it is easy to know them' should be 'easy to recognize them'. Word order 'for remember' is wrong: after 'easier' use 'to remember'. Suggestion: use correct noun phrases ('their faces'), correct verbs ('recognize'), and correct infinitive form 'to remember'.

× For me, I think it's normally for the people who cannot remember my name because in this world we have many people to know and make friends together. But if they can't remember my name is OK, we just spend time together and

✓ For me, I think it's normal when people cannot remember my name because there are many people in the world to meet and befriend. But if they can't remember my name, it's OK; we can just spend time together.

Errors: 'it's normally for the people' should be 'it's normal when people'—use adjective 'normal' and 'when' for condition. 'to know and make friends together' should be 'to meet and befriend' or 'to get to know and make friends'. Run-on and missing punctuation; 'if they can't remember my name is OK' lacks a comma and subject-verb structure; correct phrase is 'it's OK'. Suggestion: use 'when' for conditions, use correct verb phrases ('meet and befriend'), and add commas to separate clauses.

× Definitely, I think of course because I'm the person who likes to make friends the new friends always and and it's too hard to remember all the old friend like yeah

✓ Definitely. I think so, of course, because I'm the kind of person who always likes to make new friends, and it's too hard to remember all the old friends.

Errors: word order and extra words: 'the person who likes to make friends the new friends always' should be 'the kind of person who always likes to make new friends'. Tense and plurality: 'old friend' should be plural 'old friends'. Remove filler 'like yeah'. Suggestion: simplify sentence, fix adjective order ('new friends' not 'friends new'), ensure plural agreement, and remove unnecessary fillers.