Name— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: まず直接質問に答える明確なトピック文（肯定・否定）を一文で示しましょう。その後、理由や具体例を1〜2文で補足します。語法の誤り（単数・複数、冠詞、動詞形）に注意し、冗長表現を避けて文を完結させてください。接続詞（because, so, when, for example）を適切に使い、最大5文に収める練習をしてください。

예시: Not really. I find it difficult to remember people's names because I'm not good at recalling small details like names or places. When I forget a name, I usually ask the person to introduce themselves again, or I repeat their name during the conversation to help me remember.

제안: 回答はまず方法をはっきり述べ、その後に具体的なテクニックや例を示してください。語彙ミス（"helpitation"など）を正しい単語に置き換え、冗長な繰り返しを避けます。接続語（for example, usually, often）で文をつなぎ、具体的な手順や頻度を示すと説得力が増します。文は3〜4文にまとめてください。

예시: I usually use repetition and visual associations to remember names. For example, I try to meet someone or talk with them several times and repeat their name aloud during the conversation. I also link their name with a visual image, like a distinctive feature, which helps me recall it later.

제안: 最初に感情を一文で述べ、その理由を簡潔に説明しましょう。曖昧で文法的に正しくないフレーズ（"our name is our importance"など）は避け、具体的な理由や対処法を述べると良いです。感情表現の後で比較や頻度を述べる場合は接続詞（because, although, however）でつなぎ、全体を3文以内にまとめてください。

예시: I feel a little disappointed when someone can't remember my name because a name is an important part of a person's identity. However, I understand it can happen, since I often forget people's names too, so I don't take it personally.

제안: まず頻度を明確に答え、その理由を一文で述べます。続けて、具体的な対策を短く説明してください。文法ミス（spelling: memorizing, articles）や冗長な助動詞（"try to I'll"）に注意し、文を完結させてください。接続詞（so, because, therefore）を使って論理的につなげると良いです。

예시: Yes, I often do forget people's names because I am not good at memorizing them. To cope, I link names with visual cues like a person's hairstyle or clothing, and I repeat their name silently to myself, but it can still be difficult sometimes.

× No, it's difficult to remember people's name because I'm not good at remembering details like names or locations.

✓ No, it's difficult to remember people's names because I'm not good at remembering details like names or locations.

The noun 'name' should be plural 'names' to match 'people's' (plural possessive). Use plural to indicate names of multiple people. Suggestion: Use 'names' whenever referring to more than one person's name.

× So when I forget the names I let people introduce again and

✓ So when I forget the names I ask people to introduce themselves again.

The original sentence lacks a proper verb phrase and ends abruptly. 'Let people introduce again' is ungrammatical; use 'ask people to introduce themselves again' to convey the intended meaning. Suggestion: Complete the clause with a clear verb and reflexive pronoun for introductions.

× The way to remember people's name is to meet people many times.

✓ The way to remember people's names is to meet them many times.

Again 'people's name' should be 'people's names' when referring to multiple individuals. Also, 'meet people many times' is repetitive; use 'meet them' to refer back to the people mentioned. Suggestion: Keep number agreement and avoid repetition by using pronouns.

× Helpitation is effective way to recall something.

✓ Repetition is an effective way to recall something.

'Helpitation' is not a proper word; likely meant 'repetition' or 'rehearsal.' Also needs the article 'an' before 'effective way.' Suggestion: Use a correct noun such as 'repetition' and include the article: 'Repetition is an effective way...'.

× For example, I often meet people meet people. I can recall.

✓ For example, I often meet people repeatedly, so I can recall their names.

The phrase 'meet people meet people' is a duplication and the second sentence 'I can recall.' is vague. Combine ideas: indicate repetition and that it helps recall names. Suggestion: Use 'repeatedly' or 'many times' and specify what you can recall (their names).

× When someone can't remember my name I feel a little disappointed because our name is our importance since all my personality? Oh yes.

✓ When someone can't remember my name, I feel a little disappointed because my name is part of my identity and important to me.

The sentence uses incorrect pronouns ('our name', 'all my personality') and an unclear clause 'since all my personality? Oh yes.' Replace with 'my name is part of my identity' to convey the intended meaning. Also add a comma after the introductory clause. Suggestion: Use 'my' for personal possession and a clear noun phrase like 'part of my identity.'

× But I usually forget the people's name easily.

✓ But I usually forget people's names easily.

'the people's name' is incorrect combination of definite article and plural possessive; use 'people's names' without 'the.' Suggestion: Remove 'the' and pluralize 'name' to 'names.'

× Yes, I often forget the people's name because I'm not good at memoring a people's name.

✓ Yes, I often forget people's names because I'm not good at memorizing people's names.

Multiple errors: unnecessary 'the' before 'people's name', misspelling 'memoring' -> 'memorizing', and inconsistent articles. Use plural 'people's names' consistently. Suggestion: Use consistent plural form and correct spelling 'memorizing.'

× So I try to I'll link with visual cues and name, but it is difficult to

✓ So I try to link the name with visual cues, but it is difficult.

The phrase 'I try to I'll' is a mistake (combining 'try to' and 'I'll'). Use 'try to link the name with visual cues.' Also include object 'the name' and proper preposition 'with.' The sentence was incomplete; completed with 'but it is difficult.' Suggestion: Choose one modal ('try to' or 'I'll') and use 'link...with' to express association.