Name— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 答题结构基本清晰，但存在填充词（如 uh, like）、重复（if if）、语法和词序问题（at the first time → the first time / say someone's name in Mandarin → remember someone's Mandarin name）以及表达不够简洁具体。建议：1) 删除无意义的填充词，保持句子简洁；2) 使用一到两句的结构：直接回答+简要原因；3) 改善语法和词序；4) 可加入一个具体例子或比较来增强内容。

예시: It depends. I find it harder to remember Mandarin names in a large class of about 50 people because the names are unfamiliar to me. By contrast, English names seem easier to recall, so I usually use English names when I can.

제안: 回答中断且句子冗长，语法错误（the first time → the first time I meet them; 'in my form' 表达不清），缺少连贯性与完成句。建议：1) 用一到两句完成回答，先给方法（writing down, repeating names），再给细节或习惯；2) 用连词连接顺畅；3) 提供具体例子说明何时会不再记但熟悉后会记住。

예시: I usually write a new person's name down the first time I meet them and repeat it aloud once or twice to help it stick. If I meet someone regularly, I don't need to write it down anymore because I soon remember it.

제안: 回答自然且态度友好，但句子较长且可以更精简，细节可更具体（比如说明为什么说英名更容易，或举例）。注意语法（other people's name → other people's names）。建议：1) 直接陈述感受并解释原因；2) 提及具体做法或例子；3) 保持一句或两句，避免过多从句。

예시: I don't mind when people forget my name because I sometimes forget others' names too. To make things easier, I usually tell new friends to call me by my English name, which is simpler and quicker to remember.

제안: 回答直接但语法有误（I quite able → I am quite able; the name that I contact frequently with that person → the names of people I contact frequently）且表达不够具体。建议：1) 改正语法并用一两句说明记忆方法；2) 给出具体例子（比如工作或学校场合）或说明使用昵称的情况；3) 使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: No, I don't often forget names. I'm usually able to remember the names of people I see regularly, and I often use nicknames for friends because they're easier to recall.

× It depends. Like uh, if if I need to say someone's name in Mandarin, then in a class of 50 people it's really hard for me to remember at the first time. But I think English name is relatively easy to remember, so I like to call.

✓ It depends. Like, if I need to say someone's name in Mandarin, then in a class of 50 people it's really hard for me to remember at first. But I think English names are relatively easy to remember, so I like to use them.

问题类型：现在时态与名词单复数。句中“at the first time”用法不自然，应为“at first”。“English name” 应为复数“English names”或用代词“them”，因为泛指英语名字。此外“like to call” 不完整，应明确“use them” 或“call people by them”。建议：用“at first”表示“起初”，把“English name”改为复数或用代词，并把“like to call”补全为“like to use them / call people by them”。

× Basically, I will write down that person's name if I meet him or her the first time or like write it in my form and but for a long time if I got more familiar with this person I

✓ Basically, I will write down that person's name if I meet him or her for the first time, or write it in my form. But after a long time, if I get more familiar with this person, I ...

问题类型：动词 -ing/时态与句子结构错误。原句缺少“for”在“for the first time”，时态不一致用“got”应为一般现在时“get”。句子结尾不完整。建议：使用“for the first time”，保持时态一致（使用一般现在或将来时），并完成句子，例如“... I won't need to write it down.”

× I think it's fine for me because I also sometimes forget other people's name and to avoid this problem I would tell my friends that they can just call my English name that is easier.

✓ I think it's fine because I also sometimes forget other people's names, and to avoid this problem I would tell my friends that they can just call me by my English name because it's easier.

问题类型：代词与名词复数使用错误。应为“people's names”（复数）；“call my English name” 不自然，应为“call me by my English name”。此外“that is easier” 更自然为“because it's easier”。建议：把“name”改为复数，使用“call me by ...”结构，并用“because it's easier” 说明原因。

× No, I don't think so. I think I quite able to remember the name that I contact frequently with that person and usually I just say the nickname

✓ No, I don't think so. I think I'm quite able to remember the names of people I contact frequently, and usually I just use their nicknames.

问题类型：现在时态与主谓一致、名词复数、介词使用。原句“I quite able” 缺少系动词“am”；“the name that I contact frequently with that person” 语序和介词不正确，应为“names of people I contact frequently”或“people I contact frequently”。最后“say the nickname” 更自然为“use their nicknames”。建议：加上“am”，将名词用复数并调整为自然的名词短语，使用“use their nicknames”。