Name— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and clear. Start with a concise topic sentence (yes/no and reason), then give one or two specific supporting details linked with simple connectors. Reduce hesitations and avoid unclear phrases. Focus on correct grammar (e.g., tense and pronouns) and use relevant vocabulary like "introductions," "crowded events," "faces," and "names."

예시: No, I find it difficult to remember people’s names, especially when I meet many new people quickly at parties or events. For example, in a crowded networking event I often remember faces but forget names because there are too many introductions at once.

제안: Give a clear method with a short explanation and one specific example. Use linking words like "so" or "for example" to connect ideas. Correct word choice (e.g., "associate" not "pad") and grammar (plural/singular, prepositions). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: I usually associate a person’s name with a distinctive feature, so I might link "Mark" with his red jacket or "Sarah" with her laugh. For example, at work I remember Tom by his tall stature and always calling him "Tall Tom," which helps me recall his name later.

제안: Respond with a clear feeling and a brief reason, then give one specific detail. Avoid repetition and unclear words. Correct vocabulary (e.g., "unique," "annoying," "mistake") and reduce filler phrases. Keep it natural: one topic sentence + one supporting detail.

예시: I am not very bothered when people forget my name because it is quite unusual and often misheard. For instance, strangers sometimes call me "Ann" or "Anonymous," so I expect mistakes and usually just correct them politely.

제안: Answer directly and give a concise reason with one specific example. Avoid unclear and incorrect phrases. Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and organize ideas with linking words like "especially" or "for example." Keep answer to 2–3 sentences max.

예시: Yes, I often forget names, especially of extended relatives because I see many of them together and they look similar to me. For example, at family gatherings I sometimes mix up the names of my aunts and uncles because we only meet occasionally.

× Unfortunately it was very difficult for me to remember some of his name, umm, especially in a few settings when you get to new people in a very quick secret, you know they could Remember Me.

✓ Unfortunately it was very difficult for me to remember some of their names, especially in situations when you meet new people quickly.

The original mixes singular and plural incorrectly ('some of his name' should be 'some of their names') and uses incorrect person ('his' vs neutral 'their'). 'A few settings' and 'get to new people' are unnatural; use 'situations when you meet new people quickly.' Also remove irrelevant fragments like 'secret' and 'Remember Me.' Use plural 'names' to match 'some'. Suggestion: use plural nouns to match quantifiers and use 'they/their' for unspecified people.

× Even though I can carry to the face, I can't remember.

✓ Even if I can remember the face, I can't remember the name.

The phrase 'carry to the face' is ungrammatical and unclear. Likely intended: 'remember the face.' Also contrast should be 'Even if' rather than 'Even though' for hypothetical ability. Specify 'name' to clarify what cannot be remembered. Suggestion: use clear verbs like 'remember' and precise nouns.

× Normally I remember someone's names that I pad their names to the characteristic the issues on the dress or the baby sound or just in general face.

✓ Normally I remember someone's name by linking it to a characteristic, the clothes they wear, a baby voice, or their face in general.

Incorrect plural 'names' with 'someone's' should be singular 'name.' 'Pad their names to' is incorrect phrasing; use 'linking it to.' 'Issues on the dress' is unclear; 'the clothes they wear' is clearer. 'Baby sound' likely means 'a baby voice.' Ensure parallel structure when listing methods. Suggestion: keep subject-pronoun agreement and use clear prepositions like 'by' for methods.

× In the workplace, I found that easier to remember someone's name based

✓ In the workplace, I find it easier to remember someone's name.

Tense and structure are incorrect: 'found that easier to remember... based' is incomplete and mixes past with no object. Use present simple 'I find it easier' to match general truth. Remove unfinished 'based.' Suggestion: use complete clauses and consistent tense for habitual situations.

× I don't think I'm much about it because my name is Rad Unique.

✓ I don't think much about it because my name is quite unique.

'I'm much about it' is ungrammatical; correct expression is 'think much about it.' 'Rad Unique' seems mis-typed; use 'quite unique' to convey unusual name. Also 'I don't think much about it' is correct idiom. Suggestion: use standard collocations like 'think much about' and clarify adjectives.

× My name is Annoy so it's often people often mistaken it for anonymous.

✓ My name is Annoy, so people often mistake it for 'Anonymous'.

Double 'often' is redundant. Word order was wrong: 'it's often people often mistaken it' should be 'people often mistake it.' Also put the confusing name in quotes or clarify. 'Mistaken' needed to be 'mistake' as present simple verb. Suggestion: avoid double adverbs and use correct verb form for present simple.

× So I don't think too much about it, so I can't really say.

✓ So I don't think too much about it, and I can't really say more about that.

Repeating 'so' creates weak structure; better connective is 'and.' 'I can't really say' is incomplete; add 'more about that' for clarity. Suggestion: combine ideas clearly and complete the thought.

× Yes, I authentically connects people in life.

✓ Yes, I often forget people's names in life.

Original is unintelligible: 'authentically connects people' is wrong. Likely intended admission of forgetting names. Use present simple 'I often forget.' Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'I connect' vs 'connects.' Suggestion: use clear adverbs like 'often' and correct verb forms.

× I welcome to that people's names, especially my relative in the house me, especially the grandmas, the uncles and aunties, diagnosed sickness, they all look the same they have his name which is hardest to number.

✓ I have trouble with people's names, especially my relatives in the household, such as grandmothers, uncles, and aunts; they all look similar to me, so their names are the hardest to remember.

Many pronoun and noun errors: 'welcome to that' is wrong; use 'have trouble with.' 'my relative in the house me' is garbled—use 'my relatives in the household.' Use plural forms 'grandmothers, uncles, and aunts.' 'Diagnosed sickness' is irrelevant; remove. 'They have his name' is wrong pronoun choice; use 'their names.' 'Hardest to number' should be 'hardest to remember.' Suggestion: simplify sentences, use correct pronouns (they/their) and plural nouns, and ensure verbs match subjects and intended meaning.