Name— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (plural/singular), and avoid repetition. Add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Also keep sentences to a maximum of five and use more natural phrasing.

예시: Yes, I find it fairly easy to remember people’s names. However, when I meet someone for the first time I often forget faces; instead, I remember a distinctive feature, such as their hairstyle or accent, which helps me recall them later.

제안: Provide a clear, grammatically correct topic sentence and one or two specific strategies. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and avoid filler words. Keep answers concise and natural.

예시: When I meet someone new, I usually ask about the meaning or origin of their name because it starts a conversation and creates a memorable association. For example, if their name means “joy,” I repeat that link in my mind so I can remember it later.

제안: Express emotions more clearly and correct grammar. Use one or two sentences: state your feeling, then give a specific reason or example using a linking word. Avoid filled pauses and informal fragments.

예시: I’m not usually upset if someone forgets my name, but I do feel annoyed when they consistently mispronounce it because it feels disrespectful. For instance, when colleagues repeatedly say it wrong despite correction, it makes conversations awkward.

제안: Fix tense and grammar issues and make the structure clearer. Start with a direct answer, then explain briefly with a specific example and a linking word (however, but). Keep to two or three sentences.

예시: No, I don’t often forget names; I tend to remember a person’s name more easily than their face. However, if I only saw someone once, I might not recognize their face the next time even though I still remember their name.

× Yes, it is easy for me to remember people's name.

✓ Yes, it is easy for me to remember people's names.

The noun 'name' refers to multiple people, so it needs the plural form 'names'. Use plural nouns when speaking about more than one person's name. Suggestion: Match the noun number to the implied plurality (people -> names).

× I don't feel hard, but it is hard to remember the person's face.

✓ I don't find it hard, but it is hard to remember a person's face.

The phrase 'feel hard' is not idiomatic in English; use 'find it hard' or 'have difficulty'. Also 'the person's face' is too specific; use 'a person's face' when speaking generally. Suggestion: Use 'find it hard' for expressing difficulty and 'a' for a non-specific person.

× Especially when I met first time, I couldn't remember their face, but I would remember their highlighted characteristic things.

✓ Especially when I met them for the first time, I couldn't remember their faces, but I would remember their distinctive characteristics.

Missing object after 'met' and incorrect article order: say 'met them for the first time'. 'Face' should be plural if referring to multiple people. 'Highlighted characteristic things' is wordy and unidiomatic; use 'distinctive characteristics'. Suggestion: Include the object ('them'), use plural when speaking generally, and choose concise adjectival phrases.

× Whenever I met a new person, I it is my natural instinct to ask the meaning of their name.

✓ Whenever I meet a new person, it is my natural instinct to ask the meaning of their name.

Tense mismatch: 'met' (past) doesn't match general habit. For habitual actions, use present simple 'meet'. Also remove the extraneous 'I' before 'it'. Suggestion: Use present simple for routines and ensure pronouns are not duplicated.

× By that, we will have a good conversation between us and we will convey whatever ideas we both have.

✓ By doing that, we have a good conversation and share the ideas we both have.

Awkward structure: 'By that' is unclear; 'by doing that' clarifies cause. 'Have a good conversation between us' is redundant; 'have a good conversation' suffices. 'Convey whatever ideas we both have' is wordy; 'share the ideas we both have' is clearer. Suggestion: Use concise causal phrasing and simpler verbs like 'share'.

× That way it will be a fun and engaging, uh, conversation, and it won't be a hard time to remember.

✓ That way it will be a fun and engaging conversation, and it won't be hard to remember.

Unnecessary filler 'uh' removed. 'a hard time to remember' is awkward; 'hard to remember' is the correct adverbial phrase. Suggestion: Place 'hard' directly after 'be' for clarity and remove unnecessary articles.

× I don't feel sad when people don't remember my name, but I feel, uh, uncomfortable when they pronounce my name, uh, differently and uh, when they still call by that I will be too much annoyed.

✓ I don't feel sad when people don't remember my name, but I feel uncomfortable when they pronounce it differently, and when they keep calling me by that pronunciation I get very annoyed.

Multiple issues: remove filler 'uh'. 'Pronounce my name differently' is fine but 'it' is natural pronoun. 'Call by that' is incorrect; use 'call me by that pronunciation' or 'keep calling me that'. 'I will be too much annoyed' is unidiomatic; use 'I get very annoyed'. Suggestion: Use natural pronouns, correct verb phrases ('call me by...'), and idiomatic expressions for emotions.

× No, I don't often forgot people's name because it is my natural mistake to catch the person's name rather than their face.

✓ No, I don't often forget people's names because it is natural for me to catch the person's name rather than their face.

Mix of present simple and past form: 'don't forgot' should be 'don't forget'. 'People's name' should be plural 'names'. 'It is my natural mistake to catch' is unidiomatic; use 'it is natural for me to notice the name rather than the face'. Suggestion: Use base verb after 'don't', match noun plurality, and rephrase 'natural mistake' to 'natural tendency' or 'natural for me'.

× I would I couldn't recognize their face well if I meet them for second time, but their name will be stuck in my mind.

✓ I can't recognize their face well if I meet them for the second time, but their name sticks in my mind.

Confused modal and tense forms: 'I would I couldn't' is ungrammatical and redundant. For general conditional/habit use present simple: 'I can't recognize their face well if I meet them for the second time'. 'For second time' needs article 'the'. 'Their name will be stuck' is awkward; 'their name sticks' or 'their name stays' is better for habitual situations. Suggestion: Use simple present for habitual conditions, remove redundant words, and use idiomatic verbs like 'stick' in present simple.