Hometown— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Nên mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp (ví dụ: "My hometown is..."), sau đó thêm 1-2 câu chi tiết ngắn gọn về vị trí và một đặc điểm nổi bật. Tránh câu quá dài, chia thành câu ngắn, dùng từ vựng chính xác (ví dụ: province, city, region) và sửa lỗi giới từ/động từ.

예시: My hometown is Hatting Province in Vietnam. It’s a rural area known for its large network of canals. I grew up there with my family and remember spending a lot of time outdoors.

제안: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có lỗi từ vựng cùng cấu trúc ("quarter", "should release it"). Cần một câu chủ đề trực tiếp nêu điều mình thích, sau đó nêu một hoặc hai ví dụ cụ thể (món ăn, chợ, quán ăn). Dùng liên từ (for example, because) để nối ý và tránh câu mơ hồ.

예시: I especially like the food in my hometown because there are many traditional dishes. For example, there is a popular noodle soup and several street-food stalls where families cook recipes passed down for generations.

제안: Trả lời khá rõ nhưng có lỗi nhỏ về giới từ và độ chính xác thời gian. Nên bắt đầu trực tiếp và dùng cấu trúc đúng ("I was born there" hoặc "I have lived there for..."). Nếu cần, bổ sung thông tin ngắn về hiện tại (ví dụ: đã chuyển đi hay vẫn sống ở đó) để làm phong phú câu trả lời.

예시: I was born there, so I lived in my hometown for 14 years. I moved to the city for university two years ago, but I still visit my family there regularly.

제안: Ý chính rõ ràng và có ví dụ, nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp (động từ số nhiều, mệnh đề không hoàn chỉnh). Nên dùng câu chủ đề mạnh mẽ, theo sau bằng lý do cụ thể sử dụng liên từ (because, for example) và hoàn thiện ví dụ. Tránh câu bị bỏ dở và chú ý tới thì và số ít/nhóm danh từ.

예시: Yes, I think it is a good place for young people because it’s peaceful and affordable. For example, many young families choose to live there since locals are friendly and there are several small businesses and community services that support everyday life.

× My parents were born in Vietnam show my hometown is in Hatting province is in a large province canal for buying mud and I grew up there with my family.

✓ My parents were born in Vietnam, so my hometown is in Hatting province, a large province with canals for boating, and I grew up there with my family.

The original sentence contains multiple sentence structure problems: run-on sentence and missing connectors. 'show' is incorrect; use 'so' to indicate result. 'is in Hatting province is in a large province' repeats and lacks punctuation; combine phrases with commas. 'canal for buying mud' is unclear and likely a word choice error; 'canals for boating' or another intended meaning should be used. Suggestion: break complex ideas into clauses, use appropriate conjunctions (so, and), and ensure each clause is clear and concise.

× There are a lot of quarter in my hometown, but I like food in my hometown very much. It should release it.

✓ There are a lot of quarters in my hometown, and I like the food there very much.

The noun 'quarter' should be plural 'quarters' when referring to many neighborhoods (quantifier agreement). Use 'the food there' rather than repeating 'in my hometown' for concision. The phrase 'It should release it' is meaningless here and should be omitted. Suggestion: match singular/plural forms with quantifiers and remove irrelevant clauses.

× I was born in there, so I have lived there for 14 years.

✓ I was born there, so I have lived there for 14 years.

Do not use the preposition 'in' before 'there'; correct form is 'born there'. The use of present perfect 'have lived' is appropriate to indicate duration up to the present. Suggestion: remove unnecessary prepositions and keep present perfect for actions continuing to now.

× My hometown is quite peaceful and cheap, which make it suitable for young people who prefer a calm lifestyle.

✓ My hometown is quite peaceful and cheap, which makes it suitable for young people who prefer a calm lifestyle.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'my hometown' (singular), so the verb should be 'makes' (third-person singular). Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement with relative clauses.

× For example, many young families stay there because people are friendly and there are several small business that.

✓ For example, many young families stay there because people are friendly and there are several small businesses.

The noun 'business' should be plural 'businesses' to match 'several'. The trailing word 'that' is unnecessary and should be removed. Suggestion: match number (singular/plural) with quantifiers like 'several' and avoid unfinished clauses.