Hometown— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Where is your hometown?
수험생
My hometown is in Tamil Nadu and it is called as Madurai which is famous for rich, rich heritage and famous temple Madhurimi Nachaman and we are very delicious foods like parotta, Jigar, danda which are very famous and you and the other state people are used to come here and eat those foods.
시험관
What do you like about your home town?
수험생
So I like the most thing is the food which I always miss in my current city. So whenever I go to my hometown, I used to eat a lot outside food and enjoy the food with my friends and family. Yeah, this is what the best thing I like in my hometown.
시험관
How long have you lived there?
수험생
So my dad used to get a transfer for every three and four years. So in 2014, we got settled in my hometown Madurai. So it's been 2 years we are living in Madurai. Even though my dad got chittled after that due to my college studies and the work, I came out of my hometown and for me it's.
시험관
Is your home town a good place for young people?
수험생
Yeah, it's a good place for the young people. We have a lot of schools and colleges, so think people gonna have a good education in my hometown. And we have a lot of libraries, free books to access. So these are all the best things, which are all the necessary facilities we have for the young people.
평가
총점
Part 1
Where is your hometown?
점수: 52.0제안: Be concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence stating the place, then add one or two specific details. Avoid repetition and incorrect names. Use correct nouns and simple sentences and limit length to 2–4 sentences.
예시: My hometown is Madurai in the state of Tamil Nadu. It is famous for its rich cultural heritage and the Meenakshi Amman Temple. Madurai is also known for its delicious local foods such as parotta and special street snacks, which attract visitors from other states.
What do you like about your home town?
점수: 60.0제안: Start with a direct topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific examples and a linking word. Reduce hesitations and correct tense usage (e.g., "I miss" not "I always miss"). Keep it within 3 sentences.
예시: What I like most about my hometown is the food. I often miss dishes like parotta and local sweets when I am away, so whenever I visit I enjoy eating out with friends and family. This shared food culture makes my visits special.
How long have you lived there?
점수: 45.0제안: Give a clear, direct time-span answer first, then briefly explain reasons. Use correct grammar for past and present perfect (e.g., "We settled in 2014" and "we have lived there for X years"). Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear words like "chittled."
예시: We settled in Madurai in 2014, so my family has lived there for about 10 years. I have moved away for college and work at times because my father had job transfers, but Madurai has remained our family home.
Is your home town a good place for young people?
점수: 68.0제안: Answer directly then support with two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "for example"). Use proper sentence forms and avoid informal phrases like "gonna." Mention concrete benefits young people get from those facilities.
예시: Yes, Madurai is a good place for young people because it has many schools and colleges that provide quality education. For example, there are public libraries with free book access and several community centers that offer study spaces and extracurricular activities.
문법
× My hometown is in Tamil Nadu and it is called as Madurai which is famous for rich, rich heritage and famous temple Madhurimi Nachaman and we are very delicious foods like parotta, Jigar, danda which are very famous and you and the other state people are used to come here and eat those foods.
✓ My hometown is in Tamil Nadu and it is called Madurai; it is famous for its rich heritage and the famous temple Madhurimi Nachaman. We have very delicious foods like parotta, jigar, danda, which are very famous, and people from other states come here to eat them.
Multiple preposition and structure issues: 'called as' is incorrect — use 'called' or 'known as'. 'Famous for rich, rich heritage' needs the preposition 'for' and the possessive 'its'. 'You and the other state people are used to come' incorrectly uses 'to' with 'used to' and wrong pronoun; correct is 'people from other states come'. Also list punctuation and conjunctions need fixes. Suggestion: remove unnecessary prepositions, use 'known as' or 'called', use 'famous for its', and use 'people from other states come here to eat them'."},{
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