Work— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 注意语法与流利性：句子中动词形式和冠词要正确，去掉口头填充词（如 uh）。回答要更自然简洁，直接说职业和公司名称。可以用一两句补充说明职责。

예시: I'm a staff member at JD.com. I work in the customer service department, handling online orders and client inquiries.

제안: 提高地点表达的清晰度和发音准确性：直接给出城市与更具体的地点或区域，避免含糊或断断续续。去掉口头语，保持一句话完整。

예시: I work in Beijing, in the Yizhuang area, which is an industrial and business district in the southeast of the city.

제안: 改善句子结构与逻辑连贯性：先给出直接评价，然后解释原因。注意主谓宾顺序和冠词使用，避免把中文结构直接翻译。

예시: Yes, I think it's a good place to work because the company provides good benefits and a supportive team environment.

제안: 确保内容一致并避免自相矛盾：你先说喜欢但马上说不舒服，造成混淆。要明确表达喜欢或不喜欢，并给出具体原因。控制在一到两句内并用连接词。

예시: Yes, I like my workplace because the office is close to my home, which makes my commute short and convenient.

제안: 完善时态与细节：用更自然的表达说明计划的时间和具体行动。使用连接词说明步骤或优先级，提供更具体的改进方式。

예시: I plan to stay here for about three years. First, I will improve my professional skills by taking online courses, and later I hope to apply for a promotion.

× I'm uh, I'm a company staff and I working in Jingdong company.

✓ I'm a company staff, and I work at Jingdong Company.

句中出现代词/主语与动词形式不匹配的问题。原句缺少助动词“am/ do”来构成现在时，且“working”未与主语连用。建议使用一般现在时“I work”来表明职业；公司名前用介词“at”。另外“company staff”更常见的表达是“a company employee”。

× I'm working in Beijing. Yidhuang uh.

✓ I work in Beijing. Yidhuang.

句子时态应与回答职业/所在地的陈述一致，面试或自我介绍常用一般现在时。原句用现在进行时“I'm working”暗示临时性，若指长期居住或工作地点，应用“I work”或“I live”。另外“Yidhuang”应作为地点名词单独呈现。

× Yes, I think it's a good place to work our company give me.

✓ Yes, I think it's a good place to work; our company gives me good benefits.

原句结构混乱，缺少连词或标点，且第二部分缺主语与正确动词形式。按原意可能想表达“公司给了我好的工作条件/福利”，需补全主语“our company”并使用第三人称单数动词“gives”，同时明确宾语。建议把句子拆成两句或用分号连接。

× Yes, I like the place where I work. It's quite uncomfortable and the office is close to my home.

✓ Yes, I like the place where I work. It's quite comfortable and the office is close to my home.

原句使用了“不舒服（uncomfortable）”与“喜欢”之间意义矛盾。根据上下文应为“comfortable（舒适的）”。这是形容词选择错误，应根据语境选择正确的形容词。

× I will work here maybe three years. First I will upgrade my skill.

✓ I will work here for maybe three years. First, I will upgrade my skills.

原句缺少表示持续时间的介词“for”；“three years”需与持续时间连用。第二句中“skill”应使用复数“skills”更符合上下文（指多个技能），并在句首加逗号或连词使语气更连贯。