Work— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer natural and grammatically correct by using the correct verb form and a short topic sentence, then add one brief detail. For example, say "I work as a security guard" rather than "I have a work." Keep it to one or two sentences and avoid redundancy.

예시: I work as a security guard. I’m employed at a local company and I usually work the night shift to keep the premises safe.

제안: Provide a concise topic sentence naming the workplace, then add one specific detail (department, duties or location) using a linking word for coherence. Correct the company name phrasing if needed: "Soreko Electric" or "Soreko Electricity Company."

예시: I work as a security guard at Soreko Electricity Company. I’m mainly based at the main entrance where I check IDs and monitor the CCTV.

제안: Answer directly and then support with one or two specific reasons using a linking word (because/so). Avoid repeating similar phrases like "I enjoy it" and "I love my job."

예시: Yes, it’s a good place to work because the managers are supportive and the schedule is stable, so I feel comfortable doing my job.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and a single specific supporting detail using a linking word. Combine short sentences to sound more natural (e.g., "because it’s within walking distance of my home").

예시: Yes, I like my workplace because it’s within walking distance of my home, which saves me time and transport money.

제안: Be clear about your goal with a correct phrase ("I want to be a butcher") and give one specific plan or reason using a linking word (so/because). Avoid unclear phrasing like "future workplace is to be a butcher." Mention what steps you are taking to reach that goal.

예시: I want to become a butcher in the future because I’m interested in working with meat and serving my community, so I’m learning relevant skills and practicing my English to communicate with customers.

× I have a work.

✓ I have a job.

Using 'a work' is incorrect English because 'work' as an uncountable noun cannot take the indefinite article 'a'. Use the countable noun 'job' to refer to an employment position. Suggestion: say 'I have a job' or 'I am employed.'

× I am a security guard.

✓ I am a security guard.

This sentence is correct. It uses the correct article and noun phrase to describe occupation. No change needed.

× I work as a guard in the Soreko Electric Electricity Company.

✓ I work as a guard at Soreko Electric Company.

The phrase 'in the ... Company' is acceptable but 'at' is more natural for workplaces. Also 'Electric Electricity Company' is redundant; use 'Electric Company' or the company's proper name. Suggestion: use 'at Soreko Electric Company' or the exact company name.

× Yes, it is a good place to work and I enjoy it.

✓ Yes, it is a good place to work and I enjoy it.

This sentence is grammatically correct and matches the question context. No change needed.

× I love my job.

✓ I love my job.

This sentence is correct as written. It appropriately expresses positive feeling about occupation.

× Would you like the place where you work?

✓ Do you like the place where you work?

As the examiner's prompt, 'Would you like the place where you work?' is unnatural; 'Do you like...' asks about current preference. 'Would you like' implies hypothetical desire. Correction keeps present simple to match situation.

× Yes, I like the place where I work because it's near.

✓ Yes, I like the place where I work because it's nearby.

Saying 'it's near' is incomplete; use 'nearby' (adverb/adjective) or 'because it is near my home.' Suggestion: 'because it's nearby' or 'because it's near my home.'

× At my home it's a walking distance.

✓ My home is within walking distance.

'At my home' plus 'it's a walking distance' is ungrammatical. Use the phrase 'within walking distance' to indicate proximity, and place 'my home' as the subject. Alternatively: 'It's within walking distance of my home.'

× What are your future work plans?

✓ What are your future work plans?

This question is acceptable and correctly uses 'are' with plural 'plans' to ask about future intentions. No correction needed.

× My future workplace is to be a butcher, so that's why I'm practicing at IL speaking.

✓ In the future I want to be a butcher, so I'm practicing speaking English at IL.

'My future workplace is to be a butcher' is incorrect: 'workplace' refers to location, not occupation. Use 'I want to be a butcher' or 'I plan to become a butcher.' Also reorder to natural English: 'so I'm practicing speaking English at IL' (if IL is a course or school). Ensure 'speaking' is used as a noun phrase 'speaking English' and 'at IL' specifies location/course.