Work— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答句子不够自然且语法错误较多。首先要直接回答问题（I am a graduate / I graduated three years ago），然后可以补充时间信息。注意时态和简洁性，避免重复词。练习：用一句话说明你的身份，再用一句话交代时间。

예시: I graduated three years ago. Since then, I have not been working full-time while I figure out my next career step.

제안: 回答混乱，信息重复且语法错误严重。应直接说明过去在哪里工作、何时离职以及你的职位或工作内容，使用清晰的时态（past simple）和简洁句子。提供具体职责能提高分数。

예시: I worked at a media company in Wushi until last month. I was a video editor responsible for trimming footage and creating short clips for social media.

제안: 表达清晰但句子不够自然，有重复且语法错误。应直接给出理由并用连词连接理由和结果，使用更自然的表达（e.g. my boss smoked, which made the office smell unpleasant）。

예시: No, I didn't enjoy working there because my boss smoked in the office, which made the workplace smell unpleasant and uncomfortable.

제안: 回答含混，有非英语词语和不必要的重复。应直接回答是否喜欢并给出具体原因，使用连接词说明感受（e.g. I felt pressured because my boss was strict）。尽量用简单清晰的句子表达情绪和原因。

예시: No, I didn't like it because my boss was very strict and I often felt a lot of pressure at work.

제안: 总体意思可以理解，但语速犹豫、填充词多且句子重复。应先直接回答是否有计划，再说明具体期望并给出原因或细节（例如想去哪个行业或职位）。减少犹豫词并用连词使表达连贯。

예시: I don't have any concrete plans right now, but I hope to find a job in Hangzhou because I love the city. It's very beautiful and I think living there would make me happy; ideally I'd work in digital media or video production.

× No, I'm a graduated and had and had three years.

✓ No, I graduated three years ago.

原句结构混乱："I'm a graduated" 是错误表述，因 "graduate" 作动词或名词使用，但不能说 "I'm a graduated"；重复的 "had and had" 没有意义。应使用简单过去时 "graduated" 表示三年前毕业，并加上时间状语 "three years ago"。建议使用："I graduated three years ago." 或者若要现在完成时："I have graduated for three years."（更自然是前者或说 "I have been graduated for three years" 较少用）。

× I worked in Wushi last month and I I lost my job last month.

✓ I worked in Wushi last month and I lost my job then.

句中时间状语已使用过去时间（"last month"），动词应使用过去时。原句重复 "last month" 可简化为一次并可用指示词 "then" 代替。注意不要重复单词（如原句的 "I I"）。

× My job my job is a my job is many many used in cutting videos.

✓ My job involved a lot of video editing.

原句多次重复 "my job" 且语序和词汇使用不当。要表达“我的工作是剪辑很多视频”，应使用动词短语 "involved a lot of video editing" 或 "was mostly video editing"。保持句子简洁明确。

× No, I don't like that place because my boss like smoking.

✓ No, I don't like that place because my boss likes smoking.

主语 "my boss" 为第三人称单数，谓语动词应加 -s，使用 "likes"。原句缺少第三人称单数动词形式，违反主谓一致。建议记住一般现在时第三人称单数需加 -s/-es。

× It's it's smell not good.

✓ It smells bad.

英文中描述气味通常用动词 "smell"（it smells bad），而不是名词 "smell" 加形容词。原句重复 "it's" 并且语序错误。应使用主系表结构或动词用法："It smells bad." 或 "The smell is unpleasant."。

× No worry, worry hit that please, because my boss is very serious and I feel pressure in that place.

✓ No, don't worry about that, please, because my boss was very strict and I felt pressure there.

原句含义不清且有非标准表达（"worry hit that" 不合语法）。根据上下文应为安慰句 "Don't worry about that"。描述过去的工作环境用过去时（之前已说失业），所以用 "was very strict" 和 "I felt pressure there"。此外使用正确的副词和固定搭配（"don't worry about"）。

× Umm, I don't have plans recently, uh, but uh, but I hope my future, uh, workplace is in Hangzhou.

✓ I don't have any plans at the moment, but I hope my future workplace will be in Hangzhou.

"recently" 与否定通常用于现在完成时，口语中描述当前状态用 "at the moment" 或 "right now" 更自然。要表达将来的希望，用将来时 "will be"。原句混用时态，应统一并使用恰当的时间表达。

× I like that place. I like that city because Hangzhou is very beautiful and it make me very happy.

✓ I like that city because Hangzhou is very beautiful and it makes me very happy.

主语 "it"（指杭州）为第三人称单数，谓语动词应为 "makes"，加 -s。原句用了 "make"，缺少第三人称单数形式，违反主谓一致。