Work— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Mejora la claridad y la gramática: usa un sujeto claro, corrige errores de concordancia y articula ideas con conectores breves. Mantén la respuesta dentro de 2–3 oraciones naturales evitando repeticiones.

예시: I work as a receptionist at a small hostel. I enjoy talking with guests and sharing our cultures, and we often discuss future plans and travel tips.

제안: Corrige la estructura y elimina redundancias: explica el lugar con una frase tema y una o dos razones claras usando conectores como "because" o "so".

예시: I work at a small hostel near the city center. It's cozy and convenient for guests because the staff can give more personal attention.

제안: Practica coherencia y vocabulario preciso: expresa opiniones con claridad y evita muletillas (uh, umm). Usa conectores como "but" para contrastar y da ejemplos específicos de qué te falta.

예시: Sometimes it is a good place to work, but other times I feel disappointed because I can't fully use the knowledge and skills I learned at university.

제안: Mejora la precisión y el vocabulario: evita palabras incorrectas como "mortgages"; usa términos adecuados (e.g., "guests") y organiza la respuesta: opinión + razones + un detalle concreto.

예시: Not really. I would prefer a larger hotel with separate departments, so staff can specialize and I wouldn't have to handle every problem alone.

제안: Haz la respuesta más precisa y natural: usa un objetivo claro y menciona pasos concretos para lograrlo. Evita repetición y muletillas; utiliza frases de propósito como "so that" o "in order to".

예시: I want to work in a large company in an administrative role so I can apply my university training and develop professionally, possibly by taking management courses and gaining experience in different departments.

× I work as receptionist in a hostel where I really enjoy talk and share my experiences with guests and also share our my culture and they can also share their culture and just speak each other about future plans.

✓ I work as a receptionist in a hostel where I really enjoy talking and sharing my experiences with guests, and I also share our culture; they can also share theirs and we can talk to each other about future plans.

El error principal es el uso incorrecto de la forma base del verbo después de 'enjoy' y 'share'. En inglés, verbos como 'enjoy' requieren la forma -ing (gerundio): 'enjoy talking' y 'enjoy sharing'. Además, hay errores con artículos y posesivos: se necesita 'a receptionist', 'share our culture' estaba repetido y 'their culture' debe usar el posesivo apropiado; 'speak each other' no es correcto, se debe usar 'talk to each other' o 'speak with each other'. Sugerencia: usar gerundios después de 'enjoy', corregir artículos 'a', usar 'theirs' o 'their culture', y usar 'talk to each other' para expresar interacción.

× I work in a hostel where is which is really small but I think it's more convenient for all guests and also is more warm because you can just focus on them on them.

✓ I work in a hostel which is really small, but I think it's more convenient for all guests and also warmer because you can just focus on them.

Se usó una estructura incorrecta al combinar 'where' y 'which' y al ubicar el verbo 'to be'. En inglés se dice 'a hostel which is' o 'a hostel that is'; no se usa 'where is which is'. También 'is more warm' debe ser 'warmer' (comparative adjective) y la repetición 'on them on them' es redundante. Sugerencia: elegir correctamente 'which' o 'where' y usar la forma comparativa 'warmer', eliminar repeticiones.

× Sometimes it is, the other time is uh. I feel umm, a little bit disappointing because I know that I can work in a better place using my uh, knowledge and also all my skill that I learn in the university.

✓ Sometimes it is; other times it isn't. I feel a little disappointed because I know that I could work in a better place, using the knowledge and skills that I learned at university.

Hay problemas de tiempo verbal y elección de formas: 'the other time is uh' es incorrecto, se usa 'other times' o 'other times it isn't'. 'A little bit disappointing' describe algo que causa decepción; para describirse a uno mismo se usa 'I feel a little disappointed'. 'Can work' indica posibilidad presente, pero el contexto requiere una opinión hipotética, por lo que 'could' es mejor. 'All my skill that I learn' mezcla tiempos; se debe usar plural 'skills' y pasado 'learned' (o 'learnt') y preposición 'at university'. Sugerencia: usar 'other times', 'I feel disappointed', 'could', plural 'skills' y pasado 'learned'.

× No really, it's really small so I I would like a hostel or a hotel big where you can just receive mortgages and have different departments. Umm one for each problem because nowadays I need to fix everything by myself.

✓ Not really; it's very small, so I would like to work in a larger hostel or a big hotel where you can receive guests and have different departments, one for each issue, because nowadays I need to fix everything by myself.

Varios errores: 'No really' debe ser 'Not really'. Repetición 'I I'. Orden de adjetivos: 'a hostel or a hotel big' debe ser 'a big hotel' o 'a larger hostel'. 'Receive mortgages' es incorrecto —probablemente quiso decir 'receive guests'. 'Different departments' es correcto, pero 'for each problem' suena mejor como 'for each issue'. Sugerencia: usar 'Not really', corregir adjective order ('big hotel'/'larger hostel'), usar 'guests' no 'mortgages', y 'one for each issue'.

× I would like to work in a big company as administrative position where umm I will be really successful and I will apply all my knowledge and skills that I learn in the university to grow up professionally.

✓ I would like to work in a big company in an administrative position where I will be successful and apply all the knowledge and skills that I learned at university to grow professionally.

Errores en artículos y tiempos: 'as administrative position' debe ser 'in an administrative position'. Repetición innecesaria 'umm'. 'I will be really successful and I will apply' puede simplificarse a 'I will be successful and apply'. 'That I learn in the university' mezcla tiempos; usar pasado 'learned' y preposición 'at university'. 'Grow up professionally' es calco del español; en inglés se dice 'grow professionally' o 'develop professionally'. Sugerencia: usar 'in an administrative position', pasado 'learned', y 'grow professionally'.