Work— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with one clear sentence stating your status, then add a short detail about university and major. Avoid repetition and tense errors (say 'in my final year' not 'a last year').

예시: I'm a student in my final year at Hanoi University, where I study civil law.

제안: Answer directly and clearly. If you don't work, say so and explain briefly any part-time role or internship. Use correct verbs and word order (e.g., 'I'm not currently working' or 'I work as a legal assistant'). Reduce hesitation words like 'uh' and 'umm'.

예시: I don't have a full-time job at the moment; I work part-time as a legal assistant while completing my final year at law school.

제안: Give a clear reasoned answer with specific details and correct grammar. Use linking words like 'because' and provide one or two specific benefits (e.g., networking, practical skills). Avoid vague phrases and repetition.

예시: Yes, definitely. It offers excellent career opportunities because I gain practical experience and meet professionals who can advise me on my future career.

제안: Respond directly and provide concrete examples of what you like. Use simpler, correct structures: 'I like it because...' Mention specific aspects (mentors, training, tasks) and avoid repetition and unclear nouns like 'college'.

예시: Yes, I like it a lot because the workplace helps my development: supervisors give me useful advice, and I get hands-on training that builds my legal skills.

제안: Be specific and structured: state your main goal, then give one or two concrete steps you will take to achieve it (e.g., pass the bar, gain experience). Avoid vague phrasing like 'be a many opportunities'.

예시: I plan to become a lawyer. To achieve this, I will finish my degree, complete an internship at a law firm, and prepare for the bar exam so I can practice professionally.

× I'm a student. I'm a student a last year at Hanoi University and my major is civil law.

✓ I'm a student. I'm in my last year at Hanoi University and my major is civil law.

The original has redundant phrase 'I'm a student' and incorrect article usage 'a last year'. This is a sentence structure and article error: use 'in my last year' to indicate current year of study. Remove repetition for clarity. Suggestion: say 'I'm in my last year at Hanoi University.'

× I'm not just, uh, as a legal assistant because I'm in a final year attend law university and I'm in graduating now and umm.

✓ I'm not working as a legal assistant; I'm in my final year attending law university and I'm about to graduate.

Multiple structure problems: incorrect verb forms ('attend law university'), wrong word order, and awkward phrasing. Use 'working as' for employment, 'in my final year' for current study, 'attending' as present participle, and 'about to graduate' to express imminent graduation. Suggestion: 'I'm not working as a legal assistant; I'm in my final year at law university and I'm about to graduate.'

× Yes, definitely it's a good place to go because umm, umm, the place give me more umm, career opportunities and it is give me a useful practice experience.

✓ Yes, definitely. It's a good place to go because the place gives me more career opportunities and it gives me useful practical experience.

Errors include subject-verb agreement ('place give' should be 'place gives'), wrong article usage ('a useful practice experience' is unnatural), and word choice ('practical experience'). Also separate into clearer sentences. Suggestion: use third-person singular verb forms and 'useful practical experience.'

× Yes, absolutely this is this is my development place where give me many opportunities and give me a many college which is give me many some advice and encourage me for.

✓ Yes, absolutely. This is a place for my development; it gives me many opportunities and my college provides advice and encouragement.

Multiple issues: repetition ('this is this is'), missing verbs and subject-verb agreement ('where give me' -> 'it gives me'), incorrect noun phrases ('a many college'), and incomplete clause ('encourage me for'). Clarify roles: the place gives opportunities, the college gives advice and encouragement. Suggestion: 'This is a place for my development; it gives me many opportunities, and my college offers advice and encouragement.'

× Now I umm, just think a little bit in my future, but I can talk about my plans in the future.

✓ Right now I just think a little about my future, but I can talk about my plans for the future.

Use of 'think a little in my future' is incorrect preposition ('about' not 'in') and tense/word choice: 'Now' with 'just think' prefers 'right now' or 'at the moment'. Also 'plans in the future' -> 'plans for the future.' Suggestion: use 'think a little about' and 'plans for the future.'

× I want to be a lawyer in the future and I want to be a many opportunities in the future.

✓ I want to be a lawyer in the future and I want to have many opportunities.

The second clause wrongly uses 'be a many opportunities' (incorrect verb and quantifier). Use 'have many opportunities' to express desire for opportunities. Also avoid repeating 'in the future.' Suggestion: 'I want to be a lawyer and have many opportunities.'