Work— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a direct, current and clear response. Use correct tense and expand slightly with one reason or status detail. Keep it natural and concise (1–2 sentences).

예시: I currently work part-time while studying at university. I started this job last year to help pay my tuition.

제안: Use correct grammar (subject + auxiliary + verb) and be specific about the type and name/location of the workplace. One clear sentence is enough.

예시: I work in a small café near my university that serves coffee and light meals.

제안: Answer directly and expand with a specific reason or two using linking words (because, so). Avoid informal fillers. Limit to 1–2 sentences.

예시: Yes, it's a good place to work because the shifts are flexible for students and the pay helps cover living expenses.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence then support with specific details and correct grammar. Use linking words (because, and) and keep it within 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I like it because the schedule fits around my classes and several of my old friends also work there, which makes the atmosphere friendly.

제안: State a clear career goal and give specific steps or reasons. Use accurate vocabulary (e.g., sales, technology management) and simple future forms correctly. Keep it to 2 sentences.

예시: In the future I want to work in technology sales management, ideally at a large company. To prepare, I plan to study business and gain experience in sales roles.

× Yes, I was working.

✓ Yes, I work.

The examiner asked Present (Do you work or are you a student?), so the student should use present simple. 'Was working' is past continuous and conflicts with the question. Use 'I work' for habitual/current employment.

× I working some restaurants or coffee.

✓ I work in some restaurants and coffee shops.

The original sentence lacks an auxiliary or correct verb form ('I working' is missing 'am' or should be 'I work') and uses 'or' incorrectly. Use present simple 'I work' for routine, add preposition 'in' and pluralize 'coffee shop' to 'coffee shops' for natural expression.

× Hey, good for the students. Yeah, get some money.

✓ Yes, it's good for students. They can earn some money.

'Hey' is informal and unnecessary. 'Good for the students' needs an appropriate subject and verb: 'it's good for students.' 'Get some money' is missing a subject and a suitable verb form; 'They can earn some money' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Yes, I like it because I work on my class to school and my old friends is working here. It's good.

✓ Yes, I like it because I can work around my classes at school, and my old friends are working here. It's good.

Multiple issues: 'work on my class to school' is ungrammatical—use 'work around my classes at school' to express scheduling compatibility. 'My old friends is working' has incorrect verb agreement and pronoun usage; 'friends' is plural so use 'are working'. The corrected sentence fixes word order and subject-verb agreement.

× I want to work in this sales technology management and I will want to go to big company.

✓ I want to work in sales or technology management, and I would like to work for a big company.

The original mixes fields awkwardly: 'in this sales technology management' is unclear. Separate options with 'or' and use parallel nouns. 'I will want to go to big company' uses incorrect future/modal form and missing article; 'I would like to work for a big company' is a natural expression of future desire and uses correct preposition and article.