Work— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và ngắn gọn hơn. Nên trả lời trực tiếp (student), sau đó cung cấp thông tin bổ sung chính xác (school level, age). Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như “I'm a highly secondary school” — phải nói vai trò của bạn (a student) hoặc tên trường. Sử dụng tối đa 2–3 câu, mỗi câu đầy đủ chủ ngữ và động từ.

예시: I am a student. I study at a senior secondary school in Wangi City and I am 18 years old.

제안: Câu trả lời không trả lời đúng câu hỏi (nơi làm việc). Cần bắt đầu bằng câu trả lời trực tiếp: “I don't work.” Sau đó giải thích bạn là học sinh và nói rõ nơi học hoặc thành phố. Tránh các cụm từ không rõ nghĩa. Dùng 1–2 câu ngắn, rõ ràng, có cấu trúc đúng ngữ pháp.

예시: I don't work at the moment. I am a student at a high school in Wangi City.

제안: Câu trả lời ngắt quãng, nhiều tiếng thừa và thông tin lộn xộn. Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu khẳng định rõ ràng (Yes/No) và nêu hai lý do cụ thể, liên kết bằng từ nối như “because” hoặc “and”. Tránh từ không rõ nghĩa như “US play”. Giữ tối đa 2–3 câu.

예시: Yes, it is a good place to work because the surroundings are beautiful and the atmosphere is pleasant. There are also many small shops and cafes nearby.

제안: Câu trả lời lặp ý và có nhiều lỗi từ vựng/ cấu trúc (play, clearly and music). Nên trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích 1–2 lý do cụ thể (appearance, weather, location). Dùng liên từ như “because” hoặc “and” để mạch lạc. Tránh câu không rõ nghĩa.

예시: Yes, I like the place because it is very beautiful and the weather is pleasant. It is also close to my home and there is often live music nearby.

제안: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và gần như không có ý nghĩa. Cần trả lời trực tiếp về kế hoạch tương lai (ví dụ: nghề nghiệp bạn muốn, học tiếp hay tìm việc), nêu lý do ngắn gọn và cụ thể. Dùng 2–3 câu giản dị, đúng ngữ pháp, tránh lặp từ và từ không chính xác.

예시: In the future I plan to continue my studies at university and study public administration. After that, I would like to work in local government to help my community.

× I'm a student, I'm a highly secondary school.

✓ I'm a student; I attend a higher secondary school.

The original sentence uses incorrect noun forms and verb agreement. 'I'm a highly secondary school' is ungrammatical because a person cannot 'be' a school. Use 'attend' to show the student goes to the school and 'higher secondary school' is the correct phrase. Suggestion: say 'I attend a higher secondary school' or 'I am a student at a higher secondary school.'

× I'm 18 years old.

✓ I'm 18 years old.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. Age uses the plural form 'years' after a number greater than one.

× No, I'm not work.

✓ No, I don't work.

The verb form is incorrect. Use the auxiliary 'do' for present simple negative: 'I don't work.' Using 'I'm not work' mixes 'be' and a base verb incorrectly. Suggestion: use 'I don't work' or 'I am not working.'

× I'm still days I study as foreign jobs, high grade schools and in Wangi City growing sounds.

✓ I'm still a student; I study foreign languages at a high-level school in Wangi City.

The original sentence is unstructured and contains incorrect word choices. 'Still days' and 'foreign jobs' are wrong. Clarify intended meaning: likely 'still a student' and 'study foreign languages' and 'high-level school' or 'higher grade school.' Reorder for clarity: subject + verb + object and correct noun phrases.

× Mm-hmm. Yes, it's US play.

✓ Yes, it is a pleasant place.

'It's US play' is meaningless and likely a mistaken phrase. Use present tense 'it is' plus a noun/adjective phrase describing the place. 'Pleasant place' or 'a nice place' fits the question 'Is it a good place to work?'. Ensure subject-verb structure 'it is' and proper adjective/noun.

× Umm, it's so beautiful.

✓ Umm, it's very beautiful.

'So' is informal but not incorrect; however 'very' is more suitable in formal responses. Both are grammatically acceptable; this suggestion improves register.

× And oh, opposite store cooking meals in the city.

✓ There is a food stall opposite that sells cooked meals in the city.

Original lacks correct structure and articles. Use 'There is' to introduce existence and use correct noun phrases: 'a food stall opposite' and 'sells cooked meals.' Suggestions: use 'There is a shop opposite that sells food.'

× Would you like the place where you work?

✓ Do you like the place where you work?

This is the examiner's question, not the student's. 'Would you like' is a modal for preference/future; the intended meaning in context is 'Do you like the place where you work?' No correction needed for student answer, but if rephrasing the question use 'Do you like...'. (Note: keep responses aligned to present preference.)

× Yes, I like to play where I work because it's very beautiful and love the weather in my place.

✓ Yes, I like the place where I work because it's very beautiful and I love the weather there.

Mixes verbs and objects incorrectly: 'like to play where I work' is odd unless job involves play. Use 'like the place where I work.' Add subject 'I' before 'love' and use 'there' to refer to location. Ensure parallel structure: 'it's very beautiful and I love the weather there.'

× Uh, it is very near.

✓ It is very near.

Sentence is short and fine; no article needed. Possibly add object: 'It is very near my home.' If intended phrase 'very near' is acceptable; ensure complete idea by specifying what it is near to.

× It is very clearly and music.

✓ It is very quiet and there is a lot of music.

Original mixes an adjective 'clearly' and noun 'music' incorrectly. Use adjectives: 'quiet' or 'peaceful' and indicate presence of music with 'there is a lot of music' or 'music is played.' Ensure correct parts of speech.

× What are your future work plans?

✓ What are your future work plans?

This is the examiner's question and is correct as given; present continuous for future arrangement is acceptable.

× It's a public I like I really like Polish this this have a trying right to my face.

✓ I want to work in the public sector. I really want to improve my English and work toward my career goals.

Original sentence is unintelligible and contains many structural errors. Guessing intended meaning: student may mean 'public' sector, 'I really like' something, and 'trying' to 'improve'. Provide a clear corrected response using proper clauses and verb forms. Suggestion: plan statements: 'I want to work...' and 'I am trying to improve...'. Note: corrections focus on making grammatical, coherent sentences aligned with the question.