Plants— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Pronunciation and word choice are confusing (e.g., "soreloping"). Make your answer clearer and more natural: use a topic sentence, then one or two supporting details with correct vocabulary. Keep it concise (no more than 4–5 sentences).

例: Yes, I keep several potted plants at home. They make my flat feel more natural, and caring for them is a relaxing hobby after work.

提案: Many word choices and grammar are incorrect ("grew worse", "peel"). Start with a clear topic sentence naming the plant, then add a specific detail about why you liked them and who taught you. Use correct verb forms and simple vocabulary.

例: When I was young, I grew roses in my family garden. They were very fragrant, and I enjoyed looking after them because my grandmother taught me how to prune and water them properly.

提案: The response has many meaning and grammar errors (e.g., "impressed at growing friends", "soy types"). Give a direct topic sentence about your current knowledge, then specify exactly what you can do and what you need to learn. Use correct nouns and verb forms and one linking phrase (e.g., "however", "for example").

例: I don't know much about plant care beyond the basics. For example, I can water and prune plants, but I haven't learned about soil types or fertilizing yet, so I would study those topics before growing more demanding species.

提案: This answer contains many mistakes in word choice and grammar (e.g., "pants", "floral recommend", unclear example). State a clear general statement, then give a specific cultural example with correct vocabulary and a linking phrase. Keep it concise and finish the idea logically.

例: Yes, many Chinese people do give plants as gifts. For example, it is common to present a potted plant or flower arrangement to someone who opens a new shop, because plants are thought to bring good luck and prosperity.

× Yes, I keep soreloping at home.

✓ Yes, I keep succulents at home.

The original word 'soreloping' is not an English word; likely intended 'succulents' or another plant name. This is a word choice/lexical error categorized as adjective/adverb misuse since the form is incorrect. Replace with the correct noun 'succulents' to convey meaning clearly.

× They help me feel closer to nature and also serve as a private hobby that relaxes me after work.

✓ They help me feel closer to nature and also serve as a private hobby that relaxes me after work.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. It correctly uses 'relaxes' to match the singular noun 'hobby.'

× When I was young, I grew worse in my family garden.

✓ When I was young, I grew flowers in my family garden.

The verb 'grow' is used correctly, but 'worse' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'roses' or 'flowers.' This is a lexical error involving incorrect word form; replacing with 'flowers' produces a correct past-tense context 'grew flowers.'

× They were beautiful and very fragrant and I loved to taking care of them because my grandmother taught me how to peel and water them.

✓ They were beautiful and very fragrant, and I loved taking care of them because my grandmother taught me how to prune and water them.

Multiple errors: 'loved to taking' mixes infinitive and gerund—use 'loved taking' (gerund) for parallel structure. 'Peel' is wrong for plant care; correct verb is 'prune.' This is incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs and verb forms; use proper verb 'prune' and gerund 'taking.'

× I'm not very impressed at growing friends.

✓ I'm not very confident about growing plants.

The phrase 'impressed at' is incorrect; likely meant 'confident about' or 'good at.' Also 'growing friends' is wrong noun; should be 'growing plants.' This is a preposition and word choice error—use 'confident about' and correct noun 'plants.'

× I only know the basic like watering and pruning because I have not tried it much.

✓ I only know the basics like watering and pruning because I have not tried it much.

Use plural noun 'basics' instead of 'basic.' 'Basics' correctly refers to fundamental skills. This is incorrect use of an adjective/adverb/noun form.

× I don't know much about soy types or fertilizing yet, but if I decide to grow plants mostly I will learn those thing.

✓ I don't know much about soil types or fertilizing yet, but if I decide to grow plants I will mostly learn those things.

'Soy types' is incorrect; should be 'soil types.' 'Those thing' should be plural 'those things.' Word order 'mostly I will learn' is awkward; 'I will mostly learn' or 'I will learn those things later' is better. These are adjective/adverb and noun number errors.

× Yes, many Chinese people give potted pants or floral recommend as gift.

✓ Yes, many Chinese people give potted plants or floral arrangements as gifts.

Multiple errors: 'pants' should be 'plants'; 'recommend' is wrong word—likely 'arrangement'; use plural 'gifts.' This is incorrect use of prepositions/word choice and pluralization.

× For example, is is common to Saint planes to congratulate someone when they open a new shop or start a business because friends are believed to bring good luck and.

✓ For example, it is common to send plants to congratulate someone when they open a new shop or start a business because plants are believed to bring good luck.

Many issues: 'is is' should be 'it is'; 'Saint planes' is incorrect — should be 'send plants'; sentence ended awkwardly 'and.' Also 'friends' is wrong noun; 'plants' fit context. This is sentence structure and word choice errors. Fixing these restores grammatical subject 'it' and correct verbs and nouns.