Friends— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接说明过去和现在见面地点不同，再用“过去在学校、现在在咖啡馆或购物中心”作对比。注意过去时用 met，表达“当然”应说 Of course；避免重复和未完成的句子，并补完整“nowadays”的内容。

例: Of course, the places are quite different now. I used to meet my friends at school because most of them were my classmates. These days, we usually meet at cafés or shopping malls, especially when we want to relax or have a chat.

提案: 围绕“场所是否适合取决于见面目的”回答，并清楚对比休闲聚会和商务会议。把不自然的 “what meetings” 改为 “the purpose of the meeting”，用 for example 引出具体场所；注意可数名词单复数，并补上正式会议适合的地点。

例: I think it depends on the purpose of the meeting. A café or a casual restaurant is suitable for catching up with a friend because the atmosphere is relaxed. However, a quiet office or a meeting room is better for a business meeting, where people can talk without being distracted.

提案: 你的回答有明确偏好，也提到了喜欢和朋友深入聊天；可以先说更喜欢一对一，再简洁说明群体活动的好处。将 “chat deeply” 换成更自然的 “have a deep conversation”，并说明你想认识哪类新朋友，而不是让句子停留在语法不完整的表达。

例: I prefer spending time with one friend because we can have a deeper conversation and talk about personal things. That said, I also enjoy meeting in a group from time to time. It gives me a chance to meet new people who share my interests.

提案: 回答直接，也提供了在家看电影、放松的具体场景。注意说 “close friends” 或 “close friends whom I trust”，而不是 “deeper friend”；用 “invite them over” 表示邀请来家里，并把关于家的原因和活动连接成简洁、完整的句子。

例: Yes, I would, but I usually invite only my close friends. I feel more comfortable relaxing at home with people I know well. We might sit on the sofa, watch a film, and chat, which is a nice way to spend time together.

提案: 先明确朋友对你的重要性，再用一到两个清楚的理由支持，例如朋友能理解你、提供情感支持。把 “friend is” 改为 “friends are”，避免反复修改句子；“像家人一样”可说 “like family”，并用完整例子解释朋友如何帮助你。

例: Friends are very important to me because they understand me and offer support when I feel stressed. A close friend can listen without judging and give me helpful advice. In that way, good friends feel like family.

提案: 回答了经常和朋友外出的习惯，也解释了同龄人更容易找到共同话题。注意使用 “like going out” 和 “each other”；删去重复且意思不清的年龄差内容，并补充一两个常见活动，让回答更具体、连贯。

例: Yes, I often go out with my friends. Since we are around the same age, we usually have plenty to talk about and share similar interests. We might go for a meal or take a short trip together, which is always enjoyable.

提案: 地点回答较直接，也提到会根据活动选择场所。把 “Nothing special” 换成自然的 “We usually meet...” ；避免 “in the my homes or sofas” 这类搭配错误，具体说出一两个地点，并用 because 说明为什么常在那里见面。

例: We usually meet at a shopping mall or a café. If we want to watch a film or play games, we might choose an entertainment centre instead. It really depends on what we feel like doing that day.

提案: 列举了喝咖啡、学习和户外活动等内容，但回答在最后中断，部分活动名称也不清楚。用 “We usually...” 直接回答，选择两三个确定的活动；如果想说放风筝，用 “fly kites”，并确保每个句子完整。

例: We usually go to a café and chat, or study together at the library. When the weather is sunny, we sometimes go to a park and fly kites. It’s a nice way to relax and spend time outdoors.

提案: 你提供了朋友的名字、相识时间和目前见面的情况，内容相关；要修正 “has grown me with me” 和 “I know hers”，分别可说 “grew up with me” 和 “I have known her”。注意 “hardly” 表示几乎不，和 “very often” 不宜同时使用；结尾需补完整。

例: Yes, I have a friend called Lily whom I have known since primary school, so we’ve been friends for nearly ten years. We don’t get to see each other very often now, but we meet up during holidays. When we do, we usually catch up and spend the day together.

× For course there are mmm there is be a quite different.

✓ Of course, there is quite a big difference.

表达“有……”时，there be 结构中的 be 动词应根据后面的名词确定形式。这里要表达单数的“一个很大的差异”，应使用 there is；不能同时使用 there are、there is 和 be。

× In the past I mostly meet friends at schools, not at measures in the cafes or shopping centers.

✓ In the past, I mostly met friends at school, not in cafés or shopping centers.

句子中的“In the past”明确表示过去，因此一般过去时 meet 应改为 met。

× because my friends is just my classmates

✓ because my friends were just my classmates

主语 my friends 是复数，be 动词不能用单数 is。结合上下文的过去时间，应使用复数过去式 were。

× If you I want to meet with your friend is more casual and you can discuss with what you want to do

✓ If you want to meet a friend casually, you can discuss what you want to do.

原句中 If 从句和主句混在一起，主语也不一致，导致句子结构不完整。可以用“If you want to...，you can...”构成清晰的条件句。

× you can discuss with what you want to do

✓ you can discuss what you want to do

discuss 是及物动词，后面直接接讨论的内容，不需要加介词 with。

× if you have a formal meetings

✓ if you have a formal meeting

冠词 a 后面应接单数可数名词，因此 meetings 应改为 meeting。

× I prefer hanging out with one friend let us chat deeply about some gossip and more secret, uh, topics.

✓ I prefer hanging out with one friend because it lets us chat deeply about gossip and more personal topics.

原句中的两个分句直接连接，缺少表示逻辑关系的连接成分。用 because 引出原因，可以使句子结构完整、意思清楚。

× But I also enjoy group activities, more people and friends join together to let me, uh, meet a new friend is interested in financing.

✓ But I also enjoy group activities because they give me a chance to meet new friends who are interested in finance.

原句把多个分句拼接在一起，后半部分缺少清晰的主从关系。改为 because 引导原因，并用 who 引导修饰 friends 的定语从句，使句子结构完整。

× Yes, of course, but just uh some deeper friend and close friend.

✓ Yes, of course, but only some close friends.

some 后面表示可数的人时通常需要使用复数名词，因此 friend 应改为 friends。

× I think home is a mm-hmm place so I just like my close friend to my home is convenient.

✓ I think home is a private place, so I like inviting my close friends over because it is convenient.

原句后半部分把“喜欢邀请朋友”和“方便”两个意思错误地连接在一起，缺少完整的句子结构。可以用 so 和 because 分别表达结果和原因。

× Oh, I want to say friend is really important.

✓ Oh, I want to say that friends are really important.

这里谈的是朋友这一类人，而不是某一位特定朋友，因此应使用复数 friends，并搭配 are。

× A good friend grew up with you and we you talk with them with some secret topics, they understand you better.

✓ A good friend grows up with you, and when you talk with them about personal topics, they understand you better.

原句中 we you 的代词混用使句意不清。应根据意思保留 you，并在谈论话题时使用 about，而不是重复使用 with。

× A good friend just like a family trees by yourself

✓ A good friend is just like family to you.

原句缺少谓语动词。表达“像……”时需要使用 be 动词，如 is just like。

× Of course, I really like go out with a friend rather than with my parents

✓ Of course, I really like going out with a friend rather than with my parents.

like 后面可以接动名词表示喜欢做某事，因此 go 应改为 going。

× We have more topics to talk with each others.

✓ We have more topics to talk about with each other.

固定表达是 each other，不能在 other 后再加复数词尾 s。另外，表示“谈论话题”应说 talk about topics。

× So hang out with friends, travels, it's great.

✓ So, hanging out with friends and traveling are great.

这里的 hang out 和 travel 表示活动，应使用动名词形式 hanging out 和 traveling。两个动名词短语作复数主语时，谓语动词用 are。

× we meet each other in the my homes or sofas or some entertainment place.

✓ we meet each other at my home or at a sofa or another entertainment venue.

表示在家见面通常使用 at home 或 at my home；表示在具体地点见面也通常用 at。my 前面不能再加 the。

× Of course my friend Lily who has grown me with me at my primary school.

✓ Of course. My friend Lily grew up with me in primary school.

这里是在描述 Lily 过去和自己一起成长的经历，应使用一般过去时 grew up。描述在小学期间通常使用 in primary school。

× I know hers for nearly 10 years maybe.

✓ I've known her for nearly 10 years, maybe.

for nearly 10 years 表示从过去持续到现在的时间段，应使用现在完成时 have known，而不是一般现在时 know。

× I know hers for nearly 10 years maybe.

✓ I've known her for nearly 10 years, maybe.

know 是及物动词，后面应接宾格代词 her。hers 是名词性物主代词，不能直接作 know 的宾语。

× nowadays we have been been being a good friend also.

✓ Nowadays, we are still good friends.

主语 we 是复数，不能搭配单数 friend。应使用复数 friends，并搭配 are。

× every time we have vocations we are joined together to meet with each other to hang out

✓ Whenever we have vacations, we get together to hang out.

原句中的 are joined together 使用了被动结构，但这里表达的是朋友主动相聚，应使用主动表达 get together。