Friends— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答有区别，再用过去与现在作清晰对比。注意过去的所有格应为“friends’ homes”，并用过去时描述过去的习惯；现在的习惯用一般现在时。用“because”说明时间有限即可，避免生硬的“as our time is limited”。

例: Yes, there is. We used to visit each other’s homes and play video games, but these days we usually meet at a restaurant for a meal because we have less free time.

提案: 观点明确，也提供了合适的例子。注意用“if you are meeting...”引出假设情境，并将“KTV”换成更自然、通用的“karaoke bar”。可以补充合适场所的例子，让回答更完整。

例: I think it depends on who you’re meeting and the purpose of the meeting. For example, if you’re meeting a teacher for the first time, a quiet café would be more appropriate than a karaoke bar because it feels more professional.

提案: 回答切题并给出了具体时间，但“a lot of friends”与“a group of friends”意思重复，“play around”也不够具体。把活动名称说清楚；如果你指的是羽毛球，可以说“play badminton”。

例: I prefer spending time with a group of friends because we can enjoy different activities together. For example, we played badminton last Sunday, and it was fun to catch up while getting some exercise.

提案: 直接回答后，用一两句说明家里适合招待朋友的原因。注意避免重复“home”和“friends”，并将“a video game”改成“a video game console”；谈及未来安排时，用“would”保持语气一致。

例: Yes, I would. I have a video game console and a large screen at home, so it’s a great place for us to play together. I’d invite a few friends over on the weekend.

提案: 回答表达了个人态度和原因。注意说“an important part”，并把“playing with other people”改成更贴合朋友关系的表达，例如“spending time with others”。“I always need someone”略显绝对，可以改成“it’s nice to have someone”。

例: Friends mean a lot to me because they’re an important part of my life. I’m quite outgoing, so I enjoy spending time with people and sharing my thoughts with them. They also support me when I need advice.

提案: 回答直接，但“Go out with my friends”作主语时应使用动名词形式；“relax myself”和“free me from”不自然。可以说外出能让你放松，并暂时忘记学习或工作的压力。

例: Yes, I do. Going out with my friends is a great way to relax and take a break from my studies and work. We usually have dinner or play badminton together.

提案: 地点和原因都回答到了，但注意主谓一致：“all of my friends love”；“badminton”是运动名称，不需要大写或加所有格符号。表达地点时可说“at a badminton court”，并补充朋友们喜欢做什么。

例: We often meet at a restaurant or a badminton court. My friends and I enjoy trying good food, and we also like playing badminton together.

提案: 回答中的活动名称和地点不清楚，影响理解。请确认并清楚说出运动名称；如果你指的是羽毛球，应使用“badminton”。例子中按时间顺序说明先后活动，并避免使用无法理解的地点名称。

例: We usually have a meal or play badminton together. For example, last Sunday we played badminton for two hours and then went to a seafood restaurant for dinner.

提案: 例子具体，也说明了你们认识的时间。注意“when I was graduated”应改为“when I graduated”；“he is always my classmate this year”不自然，可说“we’re still classmates”。若目前仍是同学，可用现在时表达。

例: Yes, I do. One of my oldest friends is Jason. I met him when I graduated from primary school, and we’re still classmates this year.

× Yes there is in the past we would go to others home and play video games.

✓ Yes, there is. In the past, we would go to other people's homes and play video games.

“others home”中所有格形式不正确。表示“其他人的家”时，应使用“other people”的所有格“other people's”；这里泛指多个人的家，因此用复数“homes”。

× For example, you meet your teacher for the first time, you cannot go to the KTV or bar because this is unprofessional.

✓ For example, if you meet your teacher for the first time, you cannot go to a KTV or a bar because this is unprofessional.

原句用逗号连接两个意思完整的分句，且前半句表达条件时缺少“if”。建议使用“if + 条件，主句”的结构。

× Yes, I would I have a video game in my home and also a big screen so I will invite my friends friends to come to my home and play video games together.

✓ Yes, I would. I have a video game and a big screen at home, so I will invite my friends to come over and play video games together.

“Yes, I would”后面直接接“I have”，造成两个完整句子之间缺少必要的停顿或连接。应在“I would”后断句。“my friends friends”也有重复，应简化为“my friends”。

× They're important part of my life as I am an outgoing person and I love playing with other people.

✓ They're an important part of my life as I am an outgoing person and I love playing with other people.

“part”是单数可数名词，前面需要冠词。这里应在“important part”前加不定冠词“an”。

× Go out with my friends is a perfect way for me to relax myself and free me from my homework and job.

✓ Going out with my friends is a perfect way for me to relax and free myself from my homework and job.

动词短语作主语时通常使用动名词形式，因此“Go out”应改为“Going out”。此外，“relax”通常不需要反身代词；与“free”并列时，可将“myself”放在“free”后。

× We often meet each other in a restaurant or at a Badminton court because all of my friends loves eating delicious food and playing Badminton's

✓ We often meet each other in a restaurant or at a badminton court because all of my friends love eating delicious food and playing badminton.

主语“all of my friends”是复数，谓语动词应使用“love”，不能用第三人称单数形式“loves”。“Badminton”是运动名称，通常不加复数或所有格词尾，写作“badminton”。

× I knew him when I was graduated from primary school and he is always my classmate this year.

✓ I knew him when I graduated from primary school, and he is still my classmate this year.

“graduate from primary school”表示“从小学毕业”，这里应使用主动语态“I graduated”。“was graduated”错误地使用了被动语态。