Friends— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi khiến ý nghĩa chưa rõ, chẳng hạn “miss trains”, “at school or in local cafe”, “miss see some cold”. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp về sự khác biệt giữa quá khứ và hiện tại, dùng cấu trúc “I used to..., but now...”. Ngoài ra, sửa “When I were” thành “When I was”, “at last” thành “in the past”, và tránh câu rời bắt đầu bằng “Because”.

例: When I was younger, I usually met my friends at school or in local cafés. However, now I mostly meet them near my office or catch up with them online. Since I work full-time, I do not have as much free time as I used to.

提案: Câu trả lời chưa nêu rõ lý do và có nhiều từ dùng sai như “the coffee”, “medium bakeries” và “house question and answer”. Hãy bắt đầu bằng ý chính, ví dụ quán cà phê phù hợp vì yên tĩnh và thoải mái. Sau đó thêm một lý do cụ thể, đồng thời dùng “In my opinion” và “we can have a conversation”.

例: In my opinion, cafés are suitable because they are comfortable and usually quiet enough for a conversation. We can sit down, order something to drink, and talk without being disturbed. Noisy or crowded places are less suitable because it is difficult to hear each other.

提案: Bạn đã thể hiện lựa chọn cá nhân nhưng câu trả lời còn nhiều lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp: “repair a pleasure time” nên thay bằng “prefer spending time”, và “when I play with a group” không phù hợp với ngữ cảnh. Hãy nói rõ bạn thích một người bạn hơn, sau đó giải thích rằng cuộc trò chuyện sâu sắc và dễ dàng hơn.

例: To be honest, I prefer spending time with one close friend. I find it easier to have a meaningful conversation when there are only two of us. In a large group, the conversation can become noisy, and I may not get a chance to speak much.

提案: Câu trả lời có ý chính nhưng nhiều lỗi về lựa chọn từ, số ít/số nhiều và cấu trúc: “invest” phải là “invite”, “usually has meats” phải là “usually meet”, và “in the coffee” nên là “at a café”. Hãy nói rõ bạn không mời bạn về nhà vì bố mẹ không thích, rồi nêu lựa chọn thay thế là gặp ở quán cà phê.

例: I do not usually invite my friends to my home because my parents prefer to have some privacy. Therefore, I normally meet my friends at a café instead. It is a more convenient place for us to chat and spend time together.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời đúng hướng nhưng cần dùng “friends are important to me” thay vì “my friend is important with me”. Hãy giải thích cụ thể bạn có thể chia sẻ vấn đề và nhận được sự hỗ trợ tinh thần từ bạn bè. Tránh lặp từ và những cụm không rõ nghĩa như “firing my firing”.

例: Friends are very important to me because I can have deep conversations with them. I can share my problems and ask for their advice when I am stressed. Their support helps me feel more relaxed and confident.

提案: Câu trả lời chưa rõ bạn thường đi đâu và làm gì. Hãy sửa cấu trúc thành “I usually go out...” hoặc “I usually eat out...”. Cần nói rõ địa điểm, hoạt động và chủ đề trò chuyện; tránh các cụm sai như “staying in is restaurant” và “daily day”.

例: Yes, I often go out with my friends, especially at weekends. We usually eat at a small restaurant or meet at a café. While we are there, we talk about our daily lives and update each other on what has happened recently.

提案: Hãy dùng “I usually meet my friends” thay vì “I usually meeting each other”. Câu trả lời nên nêu địa điểm cụ thể và lý do địa điểm đó phù hợp. “Meaningful talk about day flight” không rõ nghĩa, nên thay bằng “have meaningful conversations about our daily lives”.

例: I usually meet my friends at a quiet café near my home. It is convenient, and I can sometimes study there as well. More importantly, the café provides a relaxed atmosphere for us to have meaningful conversations about our daily lives.

提案: Ý tưởng về trò chuyện với bạn bè là phù hợp, nhưng cần sửa “give talk” thành “talk” hoặc “have conversations”, và “were it avoid me feels” thành cấu trúc rõ ràng như “which makes me feel”. Hãy thêm một hoạt động hoặc kết quả cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: I usually talk with my friends about our families, work, and personal problems. Sometimes we also have dinner or watch a film together. Spending time with them helps me relax after a busy day.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời trực tiếp nhưng cần dùng thì hiện tại hoàn thành: “I have known her for five years”. Hãy hoàn chỉnh câu cuối bằng cách nói bạn gặp cô ấy trên Internet khi còn học trung học, sau đó thêm một chi tiết về mối quan hệ hiện tại. Tránh kết thúc câu dang dở bằng “and I”.

例: Yes, absolutely. I have known one of my closest friends for about five years. We first met online when I was in high school, and we have stayed in touch ever since. Although we are both busy, we still try to meet or chat regularly.

× When I were younger I used to miss trains at school or in local cafe at last, but now I usually meet them near my office and we catch up online.

✓ When I was younger, I used to meet my friends at school or in a local cafe, but now I usually meet them near my office and we catch up online.

The subject I takes was, not were, in the past tense. The singular countable noun cafe needs the article a. The phrase meet my friends is used because the question asks where you met your friends.

× Because I'm 24 and working full time, I miss see some cold.

✓ Because I'm 24 and working full-time, I miss seeing some of my friends.

After miss, use a gerund with the -ing form: miss seeing, not miss see. The phrase some of my friends is grammatically complete and matches the intended meaning.

× Because I'm 24 and working full time, I miss see some cold.

✓ Because I'm 24 and working full-time, I miss seeing some of my friends.

The plural noun friends is preceded correctly by some of my. The original phrase some cold is not a grammatically appropriate noun phrase for people.

× In my opinions, the coffee is suitable for medium bakeries.

✓ In my opinion, cafes are suitable for meeting friends.

The fixed expression is in my opinion, not in my opinions, when giving one personal viewpoint. Cafes should be plural because the statement refers to places in general.

× We sit there and house question and answer for my friend was in a long time.

✓ We sit there and ask and answer questions, and my friends and I have long conversations.

The verb ask is required before questions; house cannot be used in this meaning. Use with my friends or my friends and I to show who has the conversation. The phrase for a long time is replaced by the more natural phrase long conversations.

× We sit there and house question and answer for my friend was in a long time.

✓ We sit there and ask and answer questions, and my friends and I have long conversations.

Questions is the correct plural noun, and long modifies conversations. The original word choices do not form grammatically meaningful expressions.

× And to be honest, I repair a pleasure time with one friend because when I play with a group of friends, is that too much?

✓ To be honest, I prefer spending time with one friend because spending time with a group of friends can be too much for me.

The sentence needs a clear subject and verb in the second clause. Prefer is followed by a gerund phrase, so prefer spending is appropriate. The phrase can be too much for me completes the idea correctly.

× To be honest, I repair a pleasure time with one friend because when I play with a group of friends, is that too much?

✓ To be honest, I prefer spending time with one friend because spending time with a group of friends can be too much for me.

After prefer, spending is a suitable gerund form. Using spending time also fits the question more naturally than play with a group of friends.

× I don't invest my friend to my home because my my family is uh.

✓ I don't invite my friends to my home because my family doesn't like it.

The verb invite is needed, not invest. Because family is treated as a singular collective noun here, use doesn't, not don't. The repeated possessive my should be removed.

× I don't invest my friend to my home because my my family is uh.

✓ I don't invite my friends to my home because my family doesn't like it.

The correct preposition is to after invite someone: invite my friends to my home. The original verb and preposition combination are incorrect.

× My parents don't don't like it so I usually has meats with their with my friend in the coffee.

✓ My parents don't like it, so I usually meet my friends at a cafe.

Do not repeat don't. With the subject I, use meet, not has. The plural noun friends is appropriate when speaking generally, and cafe needs the article a.

× My parents don't don't like it so I usually has meats with their with my friend in the coffee.

✓ My parents don't like it, so I usually meet my friends at a cafe.

Use at a cafe to describe the place where you meet someone. The original preposition in the coffee is not appropriate because coffee is normally a drink, while cafe is the place.

× To be honest, my friend is really important with me because I always, I always have a deep talk with their.

✓ To be honest, my friends are really important to me because I always have deep conversations with them.

Friends should be plural because the answer refers to friends in general. Use important to me, not important with me. Conversations is countable and plural, and deep conversations is more natural than a deep talk in this context.

× To be honest, my friend is really important with me because I always, I always have a deep talk with their.

✓ To be honest, my friends are really important to me because I always have deep conversations with them.

Them is the correct object pronoun after with. Their is a possessive determiner and cannot be used as the object of a preposition.

× To be honest, my friend is really important with me because I always, I always have a deep talk with their.

✓ To be honest, my friends are really important to me because I always have deep conversations with them.

The correct expression is important to me, not important with me. The preposition to shows the relationship between the friends and the speaker.

× This is difficult talk to firing my firing.

✓ It is difficult for me to talk about my feelings.

The original sentence does not have a clear grammatical structure. Use it is difficult for me to talk about... to express difficulty, and use the infinitive to talk after for me.

× I usually eating out for staying in is is restaurant and are we usually have a deep talk about daily day.

✓ I usually eat out because staying in restaurants is not very convenient, and we usually have deep conversations about our daily lives.

After the subject I in the present simple, use eat, not eating. The conjunction because is needed to connect the ideas. Daily lives is the natural plural expression when discussing everyday experiences.

× I usually eating out for staying in is is restaurant and are we usually have a deep talk about daily day.

✓ I usually eat out because staying in restaurants is not very convenient, and we usually have deep conversations about our daily lives.

The adverb usually describes a habitual action, so the present simple eat is required. Do not use the present continuous form eating after I usually in this sentence.

× I usually meeting each other in the cafe where where I can study or meaningful talk about day flight with friends.

✓ I usually meet my friends at a cafe where I can study or have meaningful conversations with them about our daily lives.

Use the base verb meet after usually for a regular habit. The verb have is needed before meaningful conversations. Remove the repeated words where where and use them as the object of with.

× I usually meeting each other in the cafe where where I can study or meaningful talk about day flight with friends.

✓ I usually meet my friends at a cafe where I can study or have meaningful conversations with them about our daily lives.

Use at a cafe when referring to the location of a meeting. Use conversations about our daily lives; the original prepositions and noun phrase do not express the intended meaning.

× I often give talk with friends about my family and were it avoid me feels happy and relaxed after busy day.

✓ I often talk with my friends about my family, and it makes me feel happy and relaxed after a busy day.

The natural verb is talk, not give talk. With the singular subject it, use makes, not avoid or another base form. The noun day is singular and countable, so it needs the article a.

× I often give talk with friends about my family and were it avoid me feels happy and relaxed after busy day.

✓ I often talk with my friends about my family, and it makes me feel happy and relaxed after a busy day.

Use a before the singular countable noun day: after a busy day. The article makes the noun phrase grammatically complete.

× Yes, absolutely. I have a friend for five years. I know her on the Internet and when I study high school and I.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I have had a friend for five years. I met her on the Internet when I was in high school.

The present perfect have had is used for a situation that began in the past and continues now. The second sentence needs a complete clause with a subject and verb. Use was in high school to describe the past period.

× Yes, absolutely. I have a friend for five years. I know her on the Internet and when I study high school and I.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I have had a friend for five years. I met her on the Internet when I was in high school.

Use was, the past tense of be, because being in high school happened in the past. Met is also the appropriate past-tense verb for the first meeting.

× Yes, absolutely. I have a friend for five years. I know her on the Internet and when I study high school and I.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I have had a friend for five years. I met her on the Internet when I was in high school.

After have in the present perfect, use the past participle had, not the base form have. Have had correctly describes a friendship that started five years ago and continues now.