Friends— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答基本切题，但语法和表达问题较多。应先明确回答“没有太大区别”，然后解释原因。注意主谓一致和过去时：使用“there isn’t a significant difference”“when we were children”。“under tok”不清楚，可能想表达“talk about the same topics”；同时避免重复使用“I think”和“actually”。

例: There isn’t a significant difference between the places I meet my friends now and in the past. We still tend to meet at someone’s home or in a café because we enjoy playing games and talking about similar topics. The main difference is that we have less free time now.

提案: 回答包含原因，但地点名称和句子结尾不清楚，逻辑也不完整。应直接说明适合的地方通常安静、私密、不拥挤；不适合的地方则嘈杂、缺乏隐私。注意使用完整句子，例如“we don’t have to worry about being overheard”。

例: Quiet and private places are suitable because we can discuss personal matters without worrying about being overheard. For example, a quiet café or someone’s home is much better than a crowded shopping centre. Noisy public places can make it difficult to have a proper conversation.

提案: 回答直接，偏好和理由都很清楚，但存在搭配和语法错误。“I think I feel”重复，应改为“I feel”；“while I spend time”可改为“when I spend time”；“concern about the topics”应改为“worry about what we talk about”。可以补充一项具体优势，使答案更完整。

例: I prefer spending time with one close friend rather than with a large group. I feel more relaxed and comfortable, and I don’t have to worry about what we talk about. We can discuss personal issues and have a deeper conversation.

提案: 回答态度明确，也提供了在家看电影的细节，但第二句含义不清，可能想说“my parents welcome them”。注意使用正确结构：“I often invite my friends over”“my parents welcome them”“we sit in the living room and watch movies”。避免“sit...and watching”的时态不一致。

例: Yes, definitely. I often invite my friends over because my parents are very welcoming and everyone feels comfortable at home. We usually sit in the living room, watch movies, and order some snacks.

提案: 内容有个人观点和具体支持，但开头“a single friend”与后文“they”不一致，应该使用“my friends are”。“talk about me”应改为“talk to me”，“when I felt depressed”在这里应使用一般现在时“when I feel depressed”。建议分成两到三句，增强清晰度。

例: Friends are extremely important to me, second only to my family. When I feel depressed, they comfort me, talk to me, and sometimes even buy me small gifts to cheer me up. Their support helps me get through difficult times.

提案: 回答有清晰的时间对比，也给出了具体频率，是较好的内容展开。需要改进时态和搭配：“in the past, we usually hung out”以及“we all have our own jobs”。“meet with each other”略显累赘，可直接说“we meet”。

例: We used to go out almost every day, but we’re much busier now because we all have jobs. As a result, we don’t have much time to hang out. These days, we usually meet about twice a month.

提案: 回答切题，地点、原因和活动都提到了，但“studies and works”应改为“studies and work”或“our jobs”。“As I just said now”不自然，可以直接开始回答；“the recent experience”应改为复数或更自然的“what has happened recently”。

例: We usually meet at a restaurant near our homes. Since we’re busy with our studies and jobs, it’s convenient for everyone. We have a meal and talk about what has happened in our lives recently.

提案: 回答列举了多个活动，内容自然且切题，但有一些固定搭配错误：“have any specific plans”“go shopping”“chat in a café”。“sometimes”重复较多，可以使用“depending on our mood”或并列结构使表达更流畅。

例: We don’t usually make specific plans. Depending on our mood, we might go shopping, have a meal, or simply sit in a café and chat. We prefer these relaxed activities because they give us time to catch up.

提案: 回答有具体人物、认识时长和共同兴趣，内容方向很好，但有几个词严重影响准确性：“a hell friend”应改为“a close friend”，“Light”可能是朋友的名字；“primarist classmates”应为“primary school classmates”，“the same interest”应为“the same interests”。注意过去时：“as we grew up, she moved”。

例: Yes, I have a close friend called Lily whom I’ve known for over ten years. We were classmates in primary school and shared many of the same interests. She moved to Australia as we grew older, but we still keep in touch online.

× Actually I think there are not a significant difference because I think we don't grow up actually we also play the same games under tok the same topics as we were child.

✓ Actually, I don't think there is a significant difference because we don't really change as we grow up. We still play the same games and talk about the same topics as we did when we were children.

“difference”是单数，因此不能使用“there are”，应使用“There is”。“as we were child”中“child”应改为复数“children”。原句中多个分句直接连接，缺少适当的标点和连接结构；另外，“under tok”不能构成正确表达，这里根据语境改为“talk about”。

× I think these places like Arcur and Private are suitable because we can talk about some personal matters without being afraid to be heard by others and the crowded public.

✓ I think places like Arcur and Private are suitable because we can talk about personal matters without being afraid that other people in the crowded public places will hear us.

原句中“others and the crowded public”连接不完整，导致句子结构不清楚。这里应使用完整的从句“other people ... will hear us”。“places like...”中不需要在“places”前使用“these”，因为后面已经说明了具体地点。

× Honestly speaking, I prefer to spend time with one close friend because I think I feel relaxed and comfortable while I spend time with her. I don't need to concern about the topics.

✓ Honestly speaking, I prefer to spend time with one close friend because I feel relaxed and comfortable when I spend time with her. I don't need to be concerned about the topics we discuss.

“concern”不能直接用于“I don't need to concern about”这种结构。表达“对……感到担心/在意”时，应使用被动结构“be concerned about”。“when I spend time...”更适合表达通常情况。

× Yes, definitely. I really invite my friends to my home, my parents longer and everyone feels relaxed and comfortable in my home. We really sit in a living room and watching movies.

✓ Yes, definitely. I often invite my friends to my home. My parents are also happy, and everyone feels relaxed and comfortable there. We usually sit in the living room and watch movies.

“my parents longer”缺少谓语动词，原句不是完整句子；这里根据语境补充为“My parents are also happy”。“sit”和“watch”由“and”连接，应保持形式一致，因此“watching”应改为“watch”。特指家里的客厅时使用“the living room”，而不是“a living room”。

× Actually I single friend is the second most important aspect in my life only behind my family when I felt depressed, they really comfort me and bought me some gifts and talk about me to make me feel happy.

✓ Actually, my friends are the second most important aspect of my life, just behind my family. When I feel depressed, they comfort me, buy me gifts, and talk to me to make me feel happy.

“I single friend”结构错误；根据后文的“they”，主语应为复数“my friends”，所以谓语使用“are”。这里描述通常发生的情况，应使用一般现在时“feel、comfort、buy、talk”，不能混用过去式“felt、bought”。“talk about me”表示“谈论我”，此处想表达“和我交谈”，应改为“talk to me”。

× Yes, honestly speaking over the past time we usually hung out with each other every day but these days we have their own jobs so they are busy and don't have enough time to hang out with me. We now only meet with each other twice a month.

✓ Yes, honestly speaking, in the past we usually hung out with each other every day, but these days we have our own jobs, so they are busy and don't have enough time to hang out with me. We now only meet twice a month.

“over the past time”表达不自然；与“these days”形成对比时，应使用“in the past”。“we have their own jobs”中主语是“we”，因此物主代词应为“our”，而不是“their”。“meet with each other”语法上可以理解，但“meet”已经表达了见面，直接说“meet twice a month”更自然。

× As I just said now, we are very busy in our studies and works. So when we have time we usually choose a restaurant that's near our homes and we have a meal and talk about the recent experience.

✓ As I just said, we are very busy with our studies and work. So, when we have time, we usually choose a restaurant that's near our homes, have a meal, and talk about our recent experiences.

固定搭配是“be busy with”，因此“in”应改为“with”。“work”通常作为不可数名词使用，不需要加复数“s”。谈论多次或不同的经历时，使用复数“experiences”更合适；同时“our recent experiences”比“the recent experience”更符合语境。

× Actually we don't have the specific plans to hang out. Sometimes we go to shopping and sometimes we have a meal or sometimes we only sit down and chat with each other in a coffee.

✓ Actually, we don't have any specific plans for hanging out. Sometimes we go shopping, sometimes we have a meal, and sometimes we just sit down and chat with each other in a café.

泛指没有计划时，使用“any specific plans”，而不是“the specific plans”。固定表达是“go shopping”，不能说“go to shopping”。表示在咖啡馆里，应使用地点名词“a café”；“in a coffee”不是正确的地点表达。并列的三个“sometimes”最好用逗号和“and”连接，使结构更清楚。

× Yes, I have a hell friend Light. We have met each other for over ten years. We are primarist classmates and we have the same interest. But as we grow up she moved to Australia.

✓ Yes, I have a close friend called Light. We have known each other for over ten years. We were primary-school classmates and had the same interests. But as we grew up, she moved to Australia.

表示持续认识某人十年，应使用“have known each other”，而不是“have met each other for...”。“primarist”不是正确的英语形容词，应改为“primary-school”。因为“classmates”和“had the same interests”描述过去的同学时期，所以使用过去时“were”和“had”。“as we grow up”与后面的过去式“moved”时态不一致，应改为“as we grew up”。