Friends— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Doğrudan bir karşılaştırma yapmışsın; ancak zaman ve fiil kullanımlarında hatalar var. “Used to meet” ve “meet” yapılarını doğru kullanmalısın. Ayrıca “for example” ifadesinden sonra virgül kullan ve geçmişte ve şimdi nerede buluştuğunuzu daha doğal biçimde açıkla.

例: Yes, there is a difference. We used to meet in shopping centres, but nowadays we usually meet at my house or at hers. It is more comfortable because we can talk privately and spend more time together.

提案: Cevabın soruya doğrudan yanıt veriyor, fakat “feel peaceful each other” doğal bir ifade değil. “Feel relaxed and comfortable with each other” kullanmalısın. Uygun yerlerin özelliklerini bir neden ve örnekle destekleyerek cevabı geliştir.

例: Some places are suitable because they are quiet, comfortable, and easy to reach. For example, a café is a good place to meet because we can relax and have a conversation without too much noise.

提案: Tercihini belirtmişsin, ancak cümle tamamlanmamış ve “one friend or your close friends” ifadesi anlam açısından belirsiz. “With one close friend” demelisin. “Whereas” veya “because” kullanarak iki seçeneği daha net karşılaştır ve cevabı tamamla.

例: I prefer spending time with one close friend. When I am with a large group, it can be difficult to have a meaningful conversation, whereas with one friend, I can talk more openly and enjoy a deeper connection.

提案: Net bir cevap ve iki neden vermişsin. Ancak “feel peaceful in my home” yerine “feel relaxed at home”, “for a go outside” yerine “to go outside” demelisin. “Too lazy” ifadesini daha doğal ve nazik şekilde “sometimes I prefer staying in” olarak kullanabilirsin.

例: Absolutely. I would invite my friends to my home because I feel relaxed and comfortable there. To be honest, I sometimes prefer staying in rather than going out, so we could watch a film or cook together.

提案: Arkadaşlarının önemli olduğunu ifade etmişsin, fakat “too significant” yerine “very important” daha doğal olur. Özne-fiil uyumuna dikkat et: “my close friend is” ve “we do everything together.” Cevabı tamamlamalı ve Domo ile yaptığınız belirli bir etkinliği örnek vermelisin.

例: Friends are very important to me, especially my close friend Domo. We have known each other for several years, and we often study, go shopping, and talk about our problems together. I can always rely on her when I need support.

提案: Sıklık belirten bir cevap vermişsin, ancak birçok fiil ve kelime kullanımı anlaşılmayı zorlaştırıyor. “I like spending time with them” ve “I feel lively” kullanmalısın. Ayrıca “I’m too cold sometimes to go outside” ya da kastın evde kalmaksa “I sometimes feel too lazy to go out” demelisin.

例: Yes, I often go out with my friends because I enjoy spending time with them and I feel more energetic when we are together. However, I sometimes stay at home when I am tired or when the weather is cold.

提案: Buluşma yerini ve bir nedenini belirtmişsin, ancak “I’m too tired to go outside” veya “I’m sometimes too lazy to go out” demelisin. “Come to my home” ve “spend time together” ifadelerini kullan. Aynı fikri tekrar etmek yerine evde ne yaptığınızı ekle.

例: We usually meet at my house because I sometimes feel too tired to go out. My friends come over, and we watch films, order food, and chat for a few hours. It is a comfortable place for all of us.

提案: Arkadaşlarınla yaptığınız etkinlikleri söylemeye çalışmışsın, fakat bazı kelimeler yanlış veya anlaşılmaz: “exfoliance” ve “ants reat” yerine muhtemelen “experiences” ve “tease each other” demek istiyorsun. “We usually talk about...” yapısını kullanarak iki veya üç anlaşılır etkinlik belirt. Konuşma dilinde “gossip about our ex-boyfriends and relationships” daha doğal olur.

例: We usually chat about our relationships, ex-boyfriends, and our daily experiences. We also tease each other and share funny stories. Sometimes we watch a film or order food together.

提案: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlamışsın ve arkadaşının ne zamandan beri hayatında olduğunu belirtmişsin. Ancak “We are friends since...” yerine “We have been friends since eighth grade” demelisin. Tek bir kişiden bahsettiğin için “her” kullan ve “like spending time together” ifadesini tercih et.

例: Yes, I have a friend I have known for a long time. We have been friends since eighth grade, so we have known each other for many years. Her name is Domo, and I value our friendship because we enjoy spending time together and always support each other.

× I think yes for example we used it to meets in the shops but now we meets in my house and her house.

✓ I think so. For example, we used to meet at the shops, but now we meet at my house or her house.

The expression used to is followed by the base form of the verb, meet, not meets. The sentence also needs punctuation and a clearer conjunction between the ideas.

× I think yes for example we used it to meets in the shops but now we meets in my house and her house.

✓ I think so. For example, we used to meet at the shops, but now we meet at my house or her house.

The subject we takes the base verb meet, not the third-person singular form meets.

× Because I think we should feel peaceful each other and we should choose where we feel comfortable.

✓ Because I think we should feel at peace with each other, and we should choose places where we feel comfortable.

The expression is feel at peace, and the relationship between people is expressed with with each other.

× I think I prefer one friend because when you meet with a group of friends you can't talk too much but when you meet with one friend or your close friends, you can

✓ I think I prefer spending time with one friend because when you meet with a group of friends, you cannot talk as much, but when you meet with one close friend, you can talk more.

The original sentence ends with can, so the final clause is incomplete. A main verb, talk, is needed after can.

× Absolutely yes because I feel peaceful in my home and comfortable and to be honest I'm too lazy sometimes for a go outside.

✓ Absolutely, because I feel at peace and comfortable at home. To be honest, I am sometimes too lazy to go outside.

The correct structure is too lazy to go, not too lazy for a go. The phrase at home is also the natural prepositional expression in this context.

× My friends are too significant for me, but particularly is my close friends is more important for me.

✓ My friends are very important to me, but my close friend is particularly important to me.

The singular subject my close friend must be followed by is. The original phrase also incorrectly combines particularly with is at the beginning of the clause.

× Her name's Domo and she is my close friend and we doing everything about

✓ Her name is Domo, and she is my close friend. We do everything together.

The present participle doing requires an auxiliary verb such as are. In this sentence, the simple present do is more appropriate for a habitual activity.

× Her name's Domo and she is my close friend and we doing everything about

✓ Her name is Domo, and she is my close friend. We do everything together.

The phrase everything about is incomplete and does not express a complete idea. Together completes the intended meaning naturally.

× I usually go with my friends because I like spend time with them and I feel loud Lows but to be honest I'm to be cold sometimes to be go outside.

✓ I usually go out with my friends because I like spending time with them, but to be honest, I am sometimes too cold to go outside.

The verb like is followed by a gerund in this structure: like spending. The correct pattern is too cold to go, not to be cold sometimes to be go.

× I usually go with my friends because I like spend time with them and I feel loud Lows but to be honest I'm to be cold sometimes to be go outside.

✓ I usually go out with my friends because I like spending time with them, but to be honest, I am sometimes too cold to go outside.

The original sentence contains several incomplete verb structures. Use like spending and too cold to go to form grammatically complete clauses.

× We usually meet at my house because I'm to be called for go outside sometimes and they come my home and we meet and we spend time with each other.

✓ We usually meet at my house because I am sometimes too cold to go outside. They come to my home, and we spend time together.

The verb come requires the preposition to before a destination: come to my home. The structure too cold to go is also required.

× We usually meet at my house because I'm to be called for go outside sometimes and they come my home and we meet and we spend time with each other.

✓ We usually meet at my house because I am sometimes too cold to go outside. They come to my home, and we spend time together.

The original sentence contains several incorrectly formed verb phrases and runs many clauses together. Separating the ideas makes the sentence grammatically complete and clearer.

× We usually gossip about or exfoliance and ex boyfriend or something or flirts or relationships and ants reat each other and like this

✓ We usually gossip about our ex-boyfriends or something, talk about flirting and relationships, and entertain each other like this.

The plural noun ex-boyfriends is appropriate when speaking generally about former partners. Parallel plural topics and activities also make the list grammatically consistent.

× We usually gossip about or exfoliance and ex boyfriend or something or flirts or relationships and ants reat each other and like this

✓ We usually gossip about our ex-boyfriends or something, talk about flirting and relationships, and entertain each other like this.

The original sentence uses or and and in an unclear sequence. The activities should be joined in a parallel structure with and, while or should introduce an alternative topic.

× We are a friend since we are in eighth class and I love them so much and we like each other and we like spend time each other.

✓ We have been friends since we were in eighth grade, and I love her very much. We like each other and like spending time together.

When referring to two people, use the plural noun friends, not the singular noun friend. Eighth grade is the natural expression for the school year.

× We are a friend since we are in eighth class and I love them so much and we like each other and we like spend time each other.

✓ We have been friends since we were in eighth grade, and I love her very much. We like each other and like spending time together.

After since, use the past tense were for the earlier time period. The present perfect have been shows that the friendship started in the past and continues now.

× We are a friend since we are in eighth class and I love them so much and we like each other and we like spend time each other.

✓ We have been friends since we were in eighth grade, and I love her very much. We like each other and like spending time together.

The verb like can be followed by a gerund: like spending. The phrase spend time also requires the preposition with before each other, or it can be replaced by the natural expression together.