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提案: Answer directly with “Yes, very often.” Correct the grammar in “I’m often to see” to “I often see,” “when I using” to “when I’m using,” and “I schooling through” to “I scroll through.” Use the plural form “advertisements,” and finish with a clear reason or result instead of stopping mid-sentence. Add a specific example of the types of advertisements you usually see.

例: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone and laptop, especially when I’m using social media platforms like Instagram and Facebook. They usually appear while I’m scrolling through my feed, and many of them are for clothes, restaurants, or mobile apps. They can be a little annoying, but some are useful because they introduce me to new products.

提案: Use the natural phrase “interesting advertisements,” not “interested advertisement,” because the advertisements are interesting. Answer with one specific advertisement rather than mentioning snacks and milk generally. Explain what made it memorable, such as its music, characters, colors, or slogan, and use the past tense consistently.

例: Yes, I remember a memorable milk advertisement from my childhood. It showed several children becoming stronger and more energetic after drinking milk, and it had a catchy song. I liked it because the animation was colorful, so I could still remember it years later.

提案: Clarify the comparison between trains and the MRT. Correct “trim” to “trains,” “commercial” to “advertisements,” and “when I to get in Taipei” to “when I take the MRT in Taipei.” Use the present tense because the question asks about your usual experience, and give a clear detail about where the advertisements appear.

例: Yes, I see quite a lot of advertisements on public transport, especially on the MRT in Taipei. They are displayed on the walls, inside the carriages, and on digital screens at the stations. I don’t notice as many advertisements on regular trains, though.

提案: Give a complete balanced answer because you begin with “It depends.” Correct “advertisement have” to “advertisements have,” “it’s advantage” to “their advantages,” and “attract tension” to “attract people’s attention.” Explain both sides fully: advertisements can be informative, but they can also be repetitive or intrusive. Avoid ending with “However, sometimes” without completing the idea.

例: It depends. I like advertisements when they are creative and provide useful information about products or services. However, I dislike advertisements that interrupt videos or appear repeatedly because they can be distracting and irritating. Overall, I prefer short and informative advertisements.

提案: Use “advertisements for luxury products” instead of “advertisement of luxury industrial.” Also, use plural nouns where appropriate, such as “perfumes, makeup, and suitcases.” Complete the reason after “because they always provide” by explaining what these advertisements offer, such as elegant visuals, useful product information, or attractive design.

例: I like advertisements for luxury products, such as perfumes, makeup, and suitcases. They usually have elegant visuals, beautiful music, and carefully designed settings. Although I don’t always buy these products, I enjoy watching the advertisements because they feel more like short films than ordinary commercials.

提案: This answer has a clear response, a specific example, and a result, so it is the strongest answer. Improve the grammar by changing “got strong influence by commercial” to “was strongly influenced by an advertisement” and “from department store” to “from a department store.” Use “advertisement” or “commercial” consistently, and connect the final ideas more naturally with “Although it was expensive, I really loved it.”

例: Yes, I have. When I was younger, I was strongly influenced by an advertisement for a perfume, so I bought it from a department store. It was quite expensive, but I loved its attractive packaging and pleasant smell. I still remember that advertisement because it made the perfume look very luxurious.

× Yes, I'm often to see advertisement on my phone and laptop especially when I using some social media such as Instagram or umm Facebook.

✓ Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone and laptop, especially when I use social media platforms such as Instagram and Facebook.

Use the present simple, I often see, to describe a regular habit. Advertisement should be plural because you see many advertisements. After when, use the present simple, I use, for a repeated situation. The phrase I'm often to see is not grammatically correct; use I often see.

× I schooling through the social media, the ad is always there and.

✓ I scroll through social media, and advertisements are always there.

Use the present simple verb scroll to describe a regular activity. Social media is normally used without the definite article in this context. Use the plural form advertisements because the speaker is referring to advertisements in general. The original sentence is also incorrectly joined and ends with the incomplete word and.

× Yes, when I was a child I watched a lot of interested advertisement on TV and I particularly had a good impression on the snacks advertisement or the milk.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I watched a lot of interesting advertisements on TV, and I was particularly impressed by advertisements for snacks and milk.

Use interesting, not interested, because the advertisements caused interest. Advertisement should be plural after a lot of. The natural preposition is impressed by, and advertisements for snacks and milk expresses the intended relationship. Add the necessary article before the singular countable noun TV advertisement only when using that singular form; here, the plural form does not need an article.

× I think I didn't see so much advertisement on trim, but I do so a lot of commercial on the MRT when I to get in Taipei and it all.

✓ I don't think I see many advertisements on trains, but I do see a lot of advertisements on the MRT when I go to Taipei.

Because the question asks about a regular experience, use the present tense, I don't think I see and I do see. Use many advertisements or a lot of advertisements because the nouns are countable and plural. The correct preposition is on trains. Use go, not to get, after when I, and the original ending is an incomplete sentence fragment.

× It depends umm sometimes advertisement have it's advantage on public because it can help people to umm remember easily to get people attract tension. However sometimes.

✓ It depends. Sometimes, advertisements have advantages in public places because they can help people remember products and attract people's attention. However, sometimes they can be annoying.

Advertisement should be plural, and advertisements take the plural verb have. Use its, not it's, when showing possession; however, the corrected sentence uses they to refer to advertisements. Use in public places rather than on public. The phrase get people attract tension is not a correct sentence structure; use attract people's attention. Add a complete clause after However, because However, sometimes is only a sentence fragment.

× I'd like to watch advertisement of luxury industrial such as perfume or makeup products or suitcase because they always provide.

✓ I'd like to watch advertisements for luxury products, such as perfume, makeup, or suitcases, because they always provide attractive images and information.

Use the plural noun advertisements when speaking generally. The correct preposition is advertisements for products. Luxury industrial is not a correctly formed noun phrase; luxury products is grammatically appropriate here. Use the plural suitcases when referring to products generally. The original sentence is incomplete after provide, so it needs an object such as attractive images and information.

× Yes I have. When I was younger I always got strong influence by commercial so I bought an expensive perfume from department store and it cost me a lot but I really love it.

✓ Yes, I have. When I was younger, I was always strongly influenced by commercials, so I bought an expensive perfume from a department store. It cost me a lot, but I really loved it.

Use the passive form was influenced because commercials affected the speaker. The past participle influenced is required after was. Commercial should be plural when referring to advertisements in general. Add the article a before the singular countable noun department store. Use loved to keep the verbs consistent with the past-time context introduced by When I was younger.