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提案: Answer the question directly by saying that you often see advertisements, then explain where they appear and how you feel about them. Avoid repeating “advertising,” “often,” and “also,” and replace unclear phrases such as “this problem might work” with a precise description. Use “advertisements” as a countable plural noun and include a clear linking word such as “especially” or “however.”

例: Yes, I see advertisements quite often when I use my phone or laptop. They usually appear on social media, websites, or before online videos. I find them slightly annoying because they interrupt what I am doing, although some of them are relevant to my interests.

提案: Give a complete and understandable description of one advertisement. Correct the past-tense and sentence-structure problems: use “I remember,” “stood out,” “I was younger,” and “promoted milk.” Explain what the mascot looked like and why the advertisement was memorable. Avoid stopping mid-sentence.

例: Yes, I remember a milk advertisement that stood out to me when I was a child. It featured a funny blue mascot who appeared whenever someone drank the milk. I found it memorable because the character was colorful and the advertisement had a catchy tune.

提案: State clearly that you see many advertisements on public transport, then mention specific locations such as inside trams, at stations, and on outdoor billboards. Use accurate vocabulary: “tram,” “advertisements,” “posters,” and “billboards.” Avoid self-correction and incomplete phrases such as “the layout.”

例: Yes, I see quite a lot of advertising on public transport. When I take the tram to school, I usually see posters inside the carriage and advertisements at the stations. There are also large billboards along the roads, so it is difficult to avoid them.

提案: Use the natural expression “a love-hate relationship” and explain both sides of your opinion. Correct the grammar in “my major is advertising,” “advertisements disrupt me,” and “when I switch videos.” Replace the unfinished ending with a clear result, such as “it is extremely irritating.”

例: I have a love-hate relationship with advertisements. My major is advertising, so I enjoy learning how campaigns are created and why they attract people. However, I dislike online advertisements when they interrupt videos or appear repeatedly on my phone.

提案: Give the category directly: “I prefer humorous advertisements.” Explain their effect using natural phrases such as “they make me laugh,” “they leave a lasting impression,” and “they are easy to remember.” Avoid repeating “also” and use a linking word such as “because.”

例: If I had to choose, I would say I prefer humorous advertisements. I like them because they make me laugh and leave a lasting impression. As a result, I can remember the brand more easily than I can remember a serious or ordinary advertisement.

提案: Answer with a complete example and explain whether the purchase was successful. Replace “I am a victim of advertisements” with “I have been influenced by advertisements,” and use the past tense for a specific purchase. Avoid the unfinished ending and clearly contrast positive and negative results with “sometimes...but sometimes.”

例: Yes, I have bought things because of advertisements, especially on TikTok and other social-media platforms. For example, I once bought a skincare product after seeing several influencers recommend it. It worked reasonably well, but I later realized that the advertisement had exaggerated its benefits.

× I often watch the advertising when I use my phone and also my laptop as well.

✓ I often watch advertisements when I use my phone and my laptop as well.

Advertising is usually an uncountable noun when referring to advertising in general, while individual adverts are countable. Use the plural noun advertisements when referring to separate adverts. Do not use the definite article the unless you mean specific advertisements already mentioned.

× I think umm, you know, the advertising also just disappears on my screen just randomly.

✓ I think, you know, the advertisements also just disappear from my screen randomly.

Advertisements is plural, so it requires the plural verb disappear, not disappears. Also, use advertisements when referring to separate adverts.

× It's maybe this problem might work.

✓ Maybe this problem might work.

The sentence contains two unnecessary structures, it is maybe and might. Use one clear modal structure: Maybe this problem might work. Avoid combining an introductory it is with might in this way.

× I remembers their advertising that really standed out to me when I were a Lugar is about a mascot.

✓ I remember an advertisement that really stood out to me when I was younger. It was about a mascot.

The subject I takes the base form remember, not remembers. The past form of stand is stood, and the past form of be with I is was. The original sentence also joins several clauses incorrectly, so separating them improves sentence structure.

× I remembers their advertising that really standed out to me when I were a Lugar is about a mascot.

✓ I remember an advertisement that really stood out to me when I was younger. It was about a mascot.

The answer describes a childhood memory, so past tense is needed. Use stood instead of standed and was instead of were with the subject I.

× I remembers their advertising that really standed out to me when I were a Lugar is about a mascot.

✓ I remember an advertisement that really stood out to me when I was younger. It was about a mascot.

Use the indefinite article an before the singular countable noun advertisement because it begins with a vowel sound. Use a before the singular countable noun mascot.

× I don't know his name but is a blue mascot.

✓ I don't know his name, but there was a blue mascot.

When introducing the existence of something, use there was or there is. Because the story is about a childhood advertisement, the past form there was is appropriate.

× He ever tied he promotes for a milk and when his brow appears.

✓ He was very cute, promoted milk, and appeared whenever the brand was shown.

The answer refers to an advertisement from the past, so the verbs should be in the past tense: was, promoted, appeared, and was shown. The clauses also need to be connected in a complete sentence.

× He ever tied he promotes for a milk and when his brow appears.

✓ He was very cute, promoted milk, and appeared whenever the brand was shown.

Milk is generally uncountable, so do not use the article a before milk. Say promoted milk, not promoted a milk.

× When I use tramp to travel to my school, I often see many boosters around tram.

✓ When I use the tram to travel to school, I often see many advertisements around the tram.

Use the preposition to in the expression travel to school. Use around the tram rather than around tram because tram is a singular countable noun and needs a determiner.

× When I use tramp to travel to my school, I often see many boosters around tram.

✓ When I use the tram to travel to school, I often see many advertisements around the tram.

A singular countable noun needs a determiner. Use the tram when referring to a particular mode of transport and the tram when referring to the vehicle. School can be used without an article when referring to its ordinary purpose.

× Sometime I also see a lot of advertise on the billboard outside.

✓ Sometimes I also see a lot of advertisements on billboards outside.

Use the adverb sometimes, not the singular noun form sometime, to describe frequency. Use the plural countable noun advertisements after a lot of.

× Sometime I also see a lot of advertise on the billboard outside.

✓ Sometimes I also see a lot of advertisements on billboards outside.

Advertisements is a countable noun and must be plural after a lot of in this context. The noun advertise is not the correct plural form.

× Sometime I also see a lot of advertise on the billboard outside.

✓ Sometimes I also see a lot of advertisements on billboards outside.

Use billboards in the plural when speaking generally about outdoor advertising locations. A singular countable noun such as billboard needs an article or another determiner.

× I have an low tate relationship with advertisement because my majors eat advertising.

✓ I have a love-hate relationship with advertising because my major is advertising.

The singular noun major must be used with the singular verb is. Also, advertising is generally uncountable when referring to the field of study or industry, so it does not need to be plural.

× I have an low tate relationship with advertisement because my majors eat advertising.

✓ I have a love-hate relationship with advertising because my major is advertising.

Use a before low because low begins with a consonant sound, although the clearer expression here is a love-hate relationship. When advertising refers to the general field, it normally does not take an article.

× I have an low tate relationship with advertisement because my majors eat advertising.

✓ I have a love-hate relationship with advertising because my major is advertising.

The singular subject my major requires the singular verb is. Do not use the plural form majors with this meaning.

× I learned how to make an advertisement but I hate it because it sometimes disrupts and make me annoyed.

✓ I learned how to make advertisements, but I hate them because they sometimes disrupt me and make me annoyed.

Advertisements is plural, so the related pronouns should be them and they. The plural subject they also requires the base verb disrupt, while make remains plural.

× I learned how to make an advertisement but I hate it because it sometimes disrupts and make me annoyed.

✓ I learned how to make advertisements, but I hate them because they sometimes disrupt me and make me annoyed.

The subject they takes the base forms disrupt and make. Do not combine the singular form disrupts with the plural subject they.

× When I just switches a video, it's just pure.

✓ When I just switch a video, it's just pure.

The subject I always takes the base form of the verb, so use switch, not switches. The third-person singular form switches is used with he, she, or it.

× I'm gonna go for the like humor advertising because it makes me fun and also it leaves an impress on my mind and also easily for me to recall it.

✓ I'm going to choose humorous advertising because it is fun, leaves an impression on my mind, and is easy for me to recall.

Use the adjective humorous to describe advertising and fun to describe the experience. Easy is an adjective after is, whereas easily is an adverb and cannot be used in the original structure.

× I'm gonna go for the like humor advertising because it makes me fun and also it leaves an impress on my mind and also easily for me to recall it.

✓ I'm going to choose humorous advertising because it is fun, leaves an impression on my mind, and is easy for me to recall.

Impression is a singular countable noun, so it needs the article an. The correct noun is impression, not impress. Use an because impression begins with a vowel sound.

× I'm gonna go for the like humor advertising because it makes me fun and also it leaves an impress on my mind and also easily for me to recall it.

✓ I'm going to choose humorous advertising because it is fun, leaves an impression on my mind, and is easy for me to recall.

The original adverb easily is placed without a complete verb phrase. Place the adjective easy after the linking verb is: it is easy for me to recall.

× I always the victims of advertisement.

✓ I am always a victim of advertisements.

The original sentence has no main verb. Add am after I. Because the subject is one person, use the singular noun victim and the article a.

× I always the victims of advertisement.

✓ I am always a victim of advertisements.

Use a before the singular countable noun victim. Advertising or advertisements can be used without the article the when speaking generally.

× When I use my social media and there's also TikTok says this product is so good and you must buy it.

✓ When I use social media, I often see TikTok videos that say this product is very good and that I must buy it.

The original sentence incorrectly combines when, there is, and says. Use a complete main clause with a subject and verb, and use that to introduce the relative clause describing the TikTok videos.

× I just, you know, like manipulate by this and I just go it by the way.

✓ I am, you know, manipulated by this, so I just buy it.

The speaker is receiving the action, so the passive form is needed: am manipulated. A passive verb must contain be plus the past participle, not the base verb manipulate by itself.

× Sometimes it's good but sometimes.

✓ Sometimes it is good, but sometimes it is not.

The second part of the sentence is incomplete because it has no verb or complement. Repeat the verb phrase, or use is not to create a complete contrast.