Mirrors— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is direct, natural, and supported by relevant examples. To make it more precise, replace “ensure everything is fine” with a specific detail about what you check, such as your hair or clothes.

例: I occasionally look at myself in the mirror, mainly to check my appearance before going out. I usually do this before an important meeting or social event to make sure my hair and clothes look neat.

提案: You answer the question, but the link between buying a mirror and using it is a little unclear. Add a brief detail about when or why you bought it, and use a comma after “Yes.”

例: Yes, I have. I bought a full-length mirror for my bedroom a few years ago. I use it every morning to check my outfit and fix my hair before leaving the house.

提案: Your answer is clear, but “resten up” and “track my appearance” are unnatural in this context. Say “freshen up” and “check my appearance.” You could also clarify that you use your phone camera instead of carrying a mirror.

例: No, I don't usually take a mirror with me. I get ready at home, and if I need to freshen up during the day, I use my iPhone camera to check my appearance.

提案: Your answer gives a clear preference and reason, but “refer” should be “prefer,” and “terrible” does not fit naturally here. Use a more precise description, such as “cluttered” or “overwhelming.”

例: No, I probably wouldn't use mirrors as decorations. I prefer photographs and a few posters because they give my room more personality. Too many mirrors might make the space feel cluttered.