Mirrors— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接并且频率明确，结构清晰。建议将“make myself tidy and clean”改为更自然的“make sure I look neat and presentable”，并将“walk out of my home”简化为“leave home”。可以补充一个具体检查项目，例如头发、衣服或仪容，使内容更加生动。

例: Yes, I do, especially before I go to work every day. I usually check my hair and clothes to make sure I look neat and presentable before leaving home.

提案: 回答切题，但缺少标点和具体细节。“before it was constructed”指代不清，而且不太自然；如果想表达房子装修前购买镜子，可以说“before my house was finished”或“while it was being decorated”。建议说明镜子的用途或摆放位置，并使用现在完成时的正确标点。

例: Yes, I have. I bought several mirrors while my house was being decorated, including a large one for the hallway and smaller ones for the bedrooms.

提案: 回答有明确观点和原因，但“look into myself in the mirror”搭配错误，应改为“look at myself in the mirror”。“I don't take a mirror with me”重复了两次，可以删去一次，并使用“because”或“so”让逻辑更紧凑。

例: No, I don’t. I usually look at myself in the mirror before leaving home, and I rarely need to check my appearance during the day, so carrying one would be unnecessary.

提案: 回答观点清楚，但“decorations”和“as decorations”重复，且“a good choice as decorations”表达不够自然。建议使用“for decorative purposes”或“as decorative items”，并补充一个具体理由，例如镜子容易留下指纹、反光太强，或不符合个人风格。

例: Probably not. I prefer to use mirrors for practical purposes rather than as decorative items because too many reflective surfaces can make a room feel uncomfortable and cluttered.

× Yes I have bought several mirrors for the rooms in my house before it was constructed.

✓ Yes, I have bought several mirrors for the rooms in my house, and I bought them before the house was constructed.

“before the house was constructed”表示过去某个明确时间之前发生的事情，因此用一般过去时“bought”更自然。前面的“have bought”用于回答“Have you ever bought...”，表示人生经历；后面的“bought”具体说明过去发生的购买行为。

× I usually look into myself in the mirror before I walk out of my home.

✓ I usually look at myself in the mirror before I walk out of my home.

表示“在镜子里看自己”时，应使用固定搭配“look at myself in the mirror”。“look into myself”通常表示“反省自己”或“探究自己的内心”，不符合这里的语境。