Mirrors— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 注意回答的自然性与简洁性。开头可简单直接（如“Yes, I do.”），然后用1-2句说明频率和原因，避免重复表达“outlook/appearance”。可以用更地道的词汇如“appearance”或“mirror”并用连词过渡。注意句子数控制在5句以内。

例: Yes, I do. I check my appearance in the mirror every morning before going out because I want to look presentable. Sometimes I also glance at it during the day if I have important meetings.

提案: 回答结构良好，但可更简洁并加入少许细节（例如镜子的类型或购买地点）以增强内容。使用连接词如“so”或“therefore”是好的，但注意不要重复意思。

例: Yes. Last term my roommates and I bought a full-length mirror online for our new dorm so we can check our outfits before classes. It was inexpensive and easy to assemble.

提案: 回答清楚且理由明确。可把句子更紧凑并用连词提高流畅性，例如先给出直接答案，再用一两句解释并给例子（phone as alternative）。避免冗余表述如“I don't”与“hardly ever”重复否定信息。

例: No, I don't usually carry a mirror because I prefer to travel light. Instead, I often use my phone's front camera to quickly check my hair or makeup.

提案: 回答显得不自信且有些含糊。建议先明确表态（Yes/No/Probably not），然后给出具体原因和一个对比细节（例如风格、功能或位置）。避免使用非正式或不确定的短语如“I'm not very sure”。

例: Probably not. I would prefer to use wallpaper or artwork to decorate my room because mirrors are more useful in a bathroom where I get ready. A framed mirror in the bathroom would be more practical.

× Well, I think every day I will check my outlook before I go outside.

✓ Well, I think every day I check my outlook before I go outside.

句子中使用“will”表示将来，但说话者在描述经常性的动作应使用一般现在时。建议将“will check”改为一般现在时“check”，用于表达习惯或经常发生的动作。

× Yes, I moved to the new dormitory of my university last term and I bought a mirror with my roommates together.

✓ Yes, I moved to the new dormitory of my university last term and I bought a mirror with my roommates.

句子已使用过去时描述过去发生的动作，问题是短语“with my roommates together”多余且不自然。将其删掉，保留“bought a mirror with my roommates”即可。建议使用简洁的过去时表达。

× Therefore, we can always check our appearances before classes.

✓ Therefore, we can always check our appearance before class.

“appearances”与“before classes”在此处显得不太自然。通常说“check our appearance”（检查自己的外貌）和“before class”（上课前）。这不是严格的语法错误但属于用词搭配问题，按常用表达改为单数更自然。

× Actually, I don't. This is mainly because I don't like to take bags and other items with me when I go outside, so I hardly ever take a mirror.

✓ Actually, I don't. This is mainly because I don't like to take bags and other items with me when I go outside, so I rarely take a mirror.

“hardly ever”语义为“几乎从不”，语气偏强且在口语中可接受，但用“rarely”更自然、中性。两者都可，但根据语境用“rarely”更合适。此处属于情态用法/频率副词选择问题。

× In addition, I always use my mobile phone to check my appearance.

✓ In addition, I always use my mobile phone to check my appearance.

该句语法正确，无需更改。保留一般现在时表达经常性动作。

× Well, I'm not very sure about this question, but I think I will decorate my room with some Wallpapers instead of mirrors because I want to set my mirror in my bathroom.

✓ Well, I'm not very sure about this question, but I think I will decorate my room with some wallpapers instead of mirrors because I want to put my mirror in my bathroom.

主要问题有两点：1) “Wallpapers”首字母不应大写；2) “set my mirror”在此语境中不自然，习惯用动词“put”或“hang”。因此改为“put my mirror”。这些属于动词搭配和大小写用法，应使用正确的动词短语和小写普通名词。