Mirrors— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct, use natural phrasing, correct grammar, and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., whether you like looking in the mirror), then give a brief reason and one supporting detail. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' correctly and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

例: I don't particularly enjoy looking in the mirror. I feel self-conscious about my body shape, so I usually only check my outfit quickly each morning before work.

提案: Give a clear, grammatical answer and concise explanation. Correct sentence structure (subject + verb) and use logical details. Explain the situation briefly and avoid confusing or irrelevant phrases.

例: No, I haven't bought a mirror. My parents already have one at my family home, and my husband provided a mirror when we set up our house, so I never needed to buy one.

提案: Be concise and vary vocabulary while correcting grammar. Start with a direct answer, then add one or two specific details using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid repeating the same idea.

例: Yes, I usually carry a small mirror with me because I like to check my makeup and ensure my outfit looks neat, especially in the morning.

提案: Provide a clear, grammatical response and one specific reason. Correct vocabulary (e.g., 'metres' is irrelevant here) and avoid unrelated statements. Keep it to 2 sentences maximum and use linking words for clarity.

例: No, I wouldn't use mirrors as decoration. My room is quite small, and I only have a small handheld mirror for checking my appearance, so I prefer other decorations instead.

× I don't like looking at myself in the mirror because I mind about my shape of my body and before I go to work I check my outfits in the morning.

✓ I don't like looking at myself in the mirror because I worry about the shape of my body, and before I go to work I check my outfit in the morning.

The phrase 'mind about' is not correct; use 'worry about'. 'Shape of my body' should be 'the shape of my body' (article use). 'Outfits' is plural though context suggests checking a single outfit before work, so use 'outfit'. Also join clauses with a comma and conjunction for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:11

× No I haven't because my mother has mirror in my hometown and I'm living in my husband. My husband also helps marriage so I never bought it.

✓ No, I haven't because my mother has a mirror in my hometown and I live with my husband. My husband also helps with household matters, so I have never bought one.

Several pronoun and noun usage issues: 'my mother has mirror' needs an article 'a mirror'. 'I'm living in my husband' is incorrect; use 'I live with my husband'. 'Helps marriage' is unclear; likely 'helps with household matters' fits. Use 'one' to refer to 'mirror'. Use present perfect 'have never bought' to match 'No I haven't'. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Yes I do. I use mirror especially I make my face and I check my outfits especially in the morning. I definitely check my face and outfits in front of mirror.

✓ Yes, I do. I use a mirror, especially to do my makeup, and I check my outfit, especially in the morning. I definitely check my face and outfit in front of the mirror.

Need indefinite article 'a' before 'mirror' and 'the' before 'mirror' when specific. 'I make my face' is unnatural; 'do my makeup' is correct. 'Outfits' changed to singular 'outfit' for consistency. Also add commas for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:22

× No, I don't use mirrors to decorate my room because I only have small meters so I just check my face and I never decorate my rooms. I'm very clean room.

✓ No, I don't use mirrors to decorate my room because I only have a small space, so I just check my face and I never decorate my room. My room is very clean.

'Small meters' is incorrect; 'a small space' or 'small room' is appropriate and requires an article. 'Rooms' should be singular to match earlier 'my room'. 'I'm very clean room' is ungrammatical; use 'My room is very clean' or 'I keep my room very clean'. Grammar problem type ID:11