Mirrors— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your response more natural and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundant phrases and incorrect verbs (e.g., “collecting myself”). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

例: Yes, I do. I usually look in the mirror every morning to make sure my clothes are neat and my hair is tidy. For example, I check my outfit and fix any stray hairs before I leave the house so I feel confident for the day.

提案: Correct grammar, verb tense and vocabulary. Use a clear past-tense topic sentence (I bought...), then give specific reasons and one brief example. Remove unclear phrases like “forge” and “my mouth.”

例: Yes, I bought a small compact mirror last year to keep in my handbag. I use it to fix my hair and touch up my makeup, especially after commuting or before important meetings.

提案: Make the sentence flow logically and correct word order and grammar. Start with a direct statement, then add when and why you use it, using linking words like “because” or “so”. Avoid fragmentary phrases.

例: Yes, I usually carry a compact mirror in my handbag because I often use it while commuting or just before an interview to check my hair and touch up my makeup so I look more professional.

提案: Combine fragments into complete sentences and provide a clear supporting detail with linking words. Give one concrete placement example and explain the result in one sentence.

例: Yes, I already have mirrors in my room because they reflect natural sunlight and brighten the space. For example, I placed a large mirror opposite the window, so the room feels more open and pleasant.