Mirrors— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免重复表达，且句子结构可以更自然流畅。例如，“track my appearance”和“show the energy”表达不够地道。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且可以适当使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I like looking at myself in the mirror because it helps me check my appearance. I usually do this every morning before going out to make sure I look presentable and feel confident.

提案: 回答中时态使用不够准确，应注意时态的一致性。此外，连接词“What's more”使用得当，但可以增加更多细节使回答更丰富。

例: Yes, I bought a new mirror last month to decorate my bedroom. Besides enhancing the room's look, it also helps me check my appearance before going out.

提案: 回答中表达不够清晰，“share the respect”用词不当，建议使用更准确的表达。同时，句子较长且结构复杂，建议拆分并使用连接词使表达更自然。

例: Yes, I usually carry a small mirror with me. I use it to check my appearance after meals and before meetings because it helps me look respectful and feel more confident.

提案: 回答中“have to brighten up the space”表达不准确，建议使用更自然的表达方式。同时，句子结构可以更简洁，避免口语填充词如“Uh”。

例: Yes, I have two mirrors in my bedroom. They brighten up the space and make the room look more stylish and spacious.

× Definitely last month I have bought a new mirror to decorate my bedroom.

✓ Definitely last month I bought a new mirror to decorate my bedroom.

这里使用了现在完成时（have bought），但句子中有明确的过去时间状语“last month”，应使用一般过去时（bought）。在英语中，表示具体过去时间的动作不能用现在完成时。

× especially after the dinner and before the meeting, because I think it can help me to share the respect and make me feel confident.

✓ especially after dinner and before the meeting, because I think it can help me to show respect and make me feel confident.

“after the dinner”中的“the”不必要，通常表示泛指时不加冠词；“share the respect”用词不当，应为“show respect”，表示表达尊重。

× they really have to brighten up the space which makes my bedroom look better and stylish.

✓ they really brighten up the space, which makes my bedroom look better and stylish.

原句中“have to”表示“必须”，与句意不符，应去掉；另外，主句和定语从句之间应加逗号以分隔。