Relax— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your answer grammatically correct, concise and natural. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific activities with linking words. Correct verb forms and articles (e.g., "listen to music"). Aim for 2–3 sentences and avoid repetition.

例: Lately I relax mostly at home. I usually play computer games or watch TV shows, and I also listen to music to unwind.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words (uh) and awkward phrases like "on the seating." Use natural expressions such as "sit on a bench" or "hang out."

例: I usually relax with my friends. For example, we often walk around the city and sit on a bench near my house to chat and relax.

提案: Answer directly and use correct collocations and sentence structure. Use linking words to explain why music is relaxing and give a brief example. Avoid repetition and fragments.

例: Yes, I find listening to music very relaxing because it helps me forget stress and improves my mood. For instance, I often listen to soft instrumental tracks when I study or before sleep.

提案: Provide a clear, complete answer with one topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Avoid short fragments and unclear endings. Use linking words to connect ideas and give specific examples of activities and why they help you relax.

例: To relax, I usually walk around the city or hang out with friends. For example, a short walk clears my mind, while chatting with friends helps me feel more cheerful.

× I relax when I play computer games or watch some TV shows, or I relaxing when I listen music.

✓ I relax when I play computer games or watch TV shows, or I relax when I listen to music.

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