Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你直接回答了问题，也尝试补充骑车上学的经历，但多处用词和语法错误影响理解。注意区分 bike（自行车）和 back（后面），用 “I had a bike” 回答是否拥有；“When I was a child” 和 “I loved riding” 是正确表达。最后的原因不够清楚，可以说明骑车如何节省时间，并用 so 衔接。尽量减少停顿和重复。

例: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I often rode my bike to school with my parents. It was an enjoyable way to spend time together, and it helped us get there more quickly.

提案: 你表达了自行车过去比现在更普遍的观点，并尝试给出原因，但重复和自我修正较多，影响流畅度。开头可以直接说 “Yes, they’re still popular in China, but ...”；注意 bikes 是复数，后面用 they。用 “ride or drive cars” 表达现在更多人选择汽车，并补充一个具体背景，例如城市通勤或交通方式变化，让对比更清楚。

例: Yes, bikes are still popular in China, especially for short trips. However, they were even more common in the past because fewer people owned cars. As incomes have risen, more people now choose to drive.

× Yeah, have a back.

✓ Yeah, I had a back.

问题问的是小时候的经历，因此回答应使用过去时。这里应将 have 改为 had。

× Yeah, have a back.

✓ Yeah, I had a back.

句子缺少主语。完整句子通常需要主语，因此应在谓语 had 前补上 I。

× When I was children

✓ When I was a child

主语 I 指一个人，child 应使用单数形式；此处还需要加不定冠词 a。

× I loved ride back to my um school

✓ I loved riding back to my um school

love 后面可以接动词-ing形式。这里应将 ride 改为 riding。

× so I need this back to uh spend my time to save our time

✓ so I needed this back to uh spend my time to save our time

这句话描述的是小时候的情况，应使用过去时。need 应改为 needed。

× it was more popular in the past country, in the in the past China

✓ it was more popular in China in the past

表示“过去在中国”时，应说 in China in the past；原句中 in the past country 的介词和语序不正确。