Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question directly, then add one clear detail about the bike and what you did with it. Use the past tense for childhood memories: say “I rode my bike” rather than “I ride my bike.” The phrases “when I was style” and “I fart with fart my friends” are unclear; if you mean that you were young and rode with friends, use those expressions. Aim for natural, complete sentences.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was blue, and I often rode it with my friends after school.

提案: Give a direct answer using a plural noun (“bikes are popular”), then explain why with a clear comparison. Use natural phrases such as “many people can’t afford a motorbike” and “workers and students use bicycles to get around.” The final sentence is unclear; replace it with a complete supporting statement. Link your reason to your answer with “because” or “so.”

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people can’t afford a motorbike, so they use bicycles to get to work or school. They’re also a convenient and inexpensive way to travel short distances.

× My bike color is blue.

✓ My bike color was blue.

The student is describing a bike from childhood, so the past tense was is needed to match the past context. Use the past tense when describing a detail of something you had as a child.

× Yes, definitely bike is most popular our country because our country most of the people cannot afford the current motorbike.

✓ Yes, definitely. Bikes are the most popular in our country because most people cannot afford a motorbike.

Bike is used to refer to bicycles in general, so the plural form bikes is appropriate. The verb must also agree with this plural subject: use are, not is. Use plural nouns when speaking about a category of things in general.

× Yes, definitely bike is most popular our country because our country most of the people cannot afford the current motorbike.

✓ Yes, definitely. Bikes are the most popular in our country because most people cannot afford a motorbike.

The phrase needs the preposition in before our country. The same location phrase should be placed with most people: most people in our country. Use in to identify the place where something is popular or where people live.

× Yes, definitely bike is most popular our country because our country most of the people cannot afford the current motorbike.

✓ Yes, definitely. Bikes are the most popular in our country because most people cannot afford a motorbike.

The superlative most popular normally takes the before it. Also, a motorbike is needed when referring to any motorbike in general; the current motorbike suggests a specific motorbike already known to the listener. Use a or an for a nonspecific singular countable noun.

× Where can worker and student always need to bike?

✓ Where can workers and students always need to bike?

Worker and student refer to people in general, so they should be plural: workers and students. Add -s to countable nouns when referring to people as a group.