Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly, then add one or two clear details about learning to ride and what you enjoyed. Avoid repeating “ride a bicycle,” reduce fillers such as “uh,” and finish your final thought instead of leaving the answer incomplete.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was about nine, but I didn’t know how to ride it at first. My cousin taught me, and after that I loved riding it around our neighborhood.

提案: Give a direct answer and explain popularity with a specific, accurate reason, such as affordability or convenience in rural areas. Avoid the unclear claim that people have no other vehicles, correct “the store are” to “stores are,” and complete the sentence. Replace fillers like “uh,” “like,” and “you know” with short pauses.

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in the Philippines, especially in rural areas. They’re an affordable and convenient way to get to nearby shops when public transport is limited. Some people also use them for exercise or commuting.

× Yes, bikes are popular in our country, Philippines, because uh we don't have like other vehicle aside from bikes.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in our country, the Philippines, because we don't have other vehicles aside from bikes.

When referring generally to more than one vehicle, use the plural noun vehicles. The phrase other vehicle is not appropriate here because the sentence refers to vehicles as a category. Use other vehicles.

× Like, you know, especially if you're living in a rural area where um the store are very far at your home you need to like really have

✓ Especially if you're living in a rural area where the stores are very far from your home, you need to have...

The plural subject stores requires the plural verb are. If you mean one store, use the store is. The transcript also cuts off before the sentence is complete, so the ending cannot be corrected without more context.

× Like, you know, especially if you're living in a rural area where um the store are very far at your home you need to like really have

✓ Especially if you're living in a rural area where the stores are very far from your home, you need to have...

Use from after far to indicate distance from a place: far from your home. At does not express this relationship. The transcript also cuts off before the sentence is complete, so the ending cannot be corrected without more context.