Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Geçmişteki çocukluk deneyiminizden bahsettiğiniz için geçmiş zaman kullanın: “I had” ve “when I was a child” demelisiniz. Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayıp kısa bir ayrıntı ekleyerek cevabınızı daha doğal ve bilgilendirici hâle getirin.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school.

提案: Görüşünüzü doğrudan ifade etmişsiniz; ancak ikinci cümlede yardımcı fiil eksik. “So many people use cars” veya “Many people are using cars” şeklinde söyleyin. Fikrinizi daha akıcı biçimde bağlamak için “because” kullanabilir ve bisiklet kullanımının neden daha az yaygın olduğunu açıklayabilirsiniz.

例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because many people prefer to travel by car. Cars are more convenient for longer journeys, although some people still cycle for exercise.

× Yes, I have a bike when I child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about the past, so use the past-tense form had instead of have.

× Yes, I have a bike when I child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The clause when I child is missing a verb. Use was to form the complete clause when I was a child.

× So many people using cars instead of bikes.

✓ So many people are using cars instead of bikes.

The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb are. In the present continuous, use are before the -ing form using.