Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Исправьте ошибку в слове: вероятно, вы хотели сказать «a bike», а не «the back». Перед словом «bike» нужен артикль: «riding a bike». Ответьте прямо и добавьте конкретную деталь — например, где вы катались или с кем.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighbourhood with my friends, and I really enjoyed it.

提案: Вы приводите уместные причины и пример, но фраза «there are some bikes in big towns» звучит расплывчато и повторяет основную мысль. Уточните, кто и почему ездит на велосипедах, а незавершённое «but» замените законченным выводом. Можно также использовать связку «as a result».

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in cities because they are affordable and help people avoid traffic. For example, many students and office workers use them for their daily commute. As a result, cycling is a convenient way to get around.

× Actually, yes, I had the back when I was a child.

✓ Actually, yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Use the indefinite article a before the singular count noun bike when referring to a bike for the first time. The is not appropriate here because the bike has not been identified.

× Riding bike was very enjoyable for me.

✓ Riding a bike was very enjoyable for me.

The singular count noun bike needs an article. Use a because the sentence refers to riding a bike in general.

× So overall bikes are popular but

✓ So overall, bikes are popular.

The sentence ends with but, a conjunction that signals that another contrasting idea should follow. Since no contrasting clause is provided, remove but to make the sentence complete.