Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你只是重复了考官的问题，没有回答是否有自行车。请先直接回答“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”，再补充一条具体信息，例如自行车的颜色、何时骑车或和谁一起骑。

例: Yes, I did. I got a small blue bike when I was about seven, and I often rode it around the neighborhood with my friends.

提案: 你表达了自行车很受欢迎，也尝试提供观察作为理由，但“because”后面的句子没有完成，结尾的“And”也造成回答中断。“When I'm seeking work”与想表达的观察场景不太自然；可以说“When I go out”或“When I’m out and about”。此外，“see so many people ride bikes”可改为“see so many people riding bikes”。请用完整句子说明你看到的情况，并在最多五句话内结束回答。

例: Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country. When I’m out and about, I often see many people riding them, especially in busy city areas. They’re convenient for short trips and can help people avoid traffic.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because. When I'm seeking work, I can see so many people ride bikes. And.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because when I'm looking for work, I see so many people riding bikes.

“Because”引导原因从句，后面需要接完整的原因，不能单独结束句子。“And”通常用于连接句子或成分，单独成句会造成句子残缺。可以把原因补充完整，并删除句末单独出现的“And”。“I can see people ride bikes”在语法上成立；改为“see people riding bikes”是更自然的表达。