Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答“有”，再补充一条具体信息。注意谈论童年经历时使用过去时：用“when I was a child”和“I had”；“parents”前可加“my”，表示“我的父母”。避免重复和中途改口。

例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood.

提案: 回答中有明显的停顿和未完成表达，后半部分难以理解。先明确说明自行车是否流行，再用一个清楚的原因或例子支持观点。谈论普遍情况时可用一般现在时，例如“many people use...”或“people prefer...”。

例: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular where I live. Many people prefer to drive or take public transport, especially when they have to travel long distances.

× Yes, when I have when I are childhood, I have a bike from my parents.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, my parents gave me a bike.

问题是在讲童年时的经历，应该使用过去时。这里的“have”应改为“had”；更自然的表达是“my parents gave me a bike”（我的父母给了我一辆自行车）。

× Yes, when I have when I are childhood, I have a bike from my parents.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, my parents gave me a bike.

主语“I”应与“was”搭配，不能说“I are”。表达“在我小时候”时，应说“when I was a child”，而不是“when I are childhood”。