Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer directly addresses the question and includes specific details about where and when you rode your bike. To sound more natural and concise, replace “gave me a feeling of freedom and independence” with “made me feel free and independent.”

例: Yes, I did. I used to ride my bike to my friend’s house every afternoon. It was also my favorite way to explore the neighborhood because it made me feel free and independent.

提案: Answer directly with “Yes, I think bikes are quite popular.” Use “bikes,” not “writes,” and say “a common means of transport” rather than “a common medium of travelling.” Add a specific reason or example, such as their affordability or use for short trips. Use “In my opinion” instead of “according to me.”

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. They’re an affordable and convenient means of transport, especially for short trips. For example, many people ride them to work or to nearby shops.

× Well according to me writes are pretty popular in my country as they are common medium of travelling.

✓ Well, according to me, bikes are pretty popular in my country as they are a common medium of travelling.

The singular countable noun medium needs the article a. The word writes appears to be a transcription error for bikes; it is corrected here to match the context. Add commas after Well and me to make the sentence easier to read.