Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Soruyu doğrudan geçmiş zamanda yanıtlayın: “No, I didn’t.” Çocukluğunuzdan bahsettiğiniz için “I don’t have” yerine “I didn’t have” kullanın. “Fall the bike” doğru bir ifade değildir; “fall off my bike” demelisiniz. Tekrarlanan kelimeler ve “something like that” yerine kısa, net bir açıklama ekleyin; örneğin ailenizin yaralanmanızdan endişelendiğini belirtin.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents were worried that I might fall off and hurt myself, especially my legs. So, I usually played at home instead.

提案: “Yes, they’re quite popular” diyerek doğrudan yanıt verin. Bisiklet kullanımının sağlıklı olduğunu açıklarken “cycling is healthy” ve “works your muscles” gibi doğru ifadeler kullanın. “Bikes generally when you make a parking or something” bölümü anlaşılmıyor; park etme konusunu kastediyorsanız bunu açıkça ifade edin ya da yanıtınıza gerekli değilse eklemeyin. Bir neden veya somut örnekle yanıtınızı tamamlayın.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in parks and along the coast. Cycling is a healthy way to exercise because it works your leg muscles. It’s also convenient for short trips, as you can usually park a bike easily.

× No, I don't have a bike because my parents worry about me when I fall the bike uh on the bike. I hurt my my my body, my leg, something like that.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike because my parents worried about me when I fell off one. I could have hurt my body or my leg.

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the answer should use past forms: didn't have, worried, and fell. Could have hurt expresses the possible injury that concerned the parents.

× No, I don't have a bike because my parents worry about me when I fall the bike uh on the bike. I hurt my my my body, my leg, something like that.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike because my parents worried about me when I fell off one. I could have hurt my body or my leg.

The correct expression is fall off a bike, not fall a bike or fall on a bike, when describing falling from it. Use off to show movement away from the bike.

× Yes, quite popular because uh so healthy when you use the bikes is make all muscle is working for the healthy for your bodies and bikes generally when you make a parking or something

✓ Yes, they are quite popular because cycling is healthy. When you ride a bike, all your muscles work, which is good for your body. You can also generally park bikes easily.

The original answer contains incomplete and incorrectly connected clauses, making the meaning difficult to follow. Use a complete clause with a subject and a verb, and separate the ideas into clear sentences.

× Yes, quite popular because uh so healthy when you use the bikes is make all muscle is working for the healthy for your bodies and bikes generally when you make a parking or something

✓ Yes, they are quite popular because cycling is healthy. When you ride a bike, all your muscles work, which is good for your body. You can also generally park bikes easily.

The subject bikes is plural, so it takes are, not is. In the clause about muscles, the plural subject muscles takes the base verb work, not is working.

× Yes, quite popular because uh so healthy when you use the bikes is make all muscle is working for the healthy for your bodies and bikes generally when you make a parking or something

✓ Yes, they are quite popular because cycling is healthy. When you ride a bike, all your muscles work, which is good for your body. You can also generally park bikes easily.

The word all refers to multiple muscles, so use the plural form muscles. In this general statement, body is more naturally singular when referring to one person's body.