Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接，但时态不正确。问题询问童年经历，应使用一般过去时：用“didn't”而不是“haven't”。可以补充一个具体细节，例如是否曾经想要一辆自行车，或平时如何出行。

例: No, I didn't. My family didn't have a bike when I was a child, so I usually walked to school.

提案: 先直接回答自行车在你们国家是否受欢迎。原回答中的“more popular than in my country”是在和自己的国家比较，逻辑不清；“everyone in a child need wants to be one”也不自然且意思不明确。建议说明哪些人常骑自行车，并给出具体原因或场景。注意自行车用复数时可说“bikes are”，也可以用“cycling is”。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students. Many children ride them to school or use them to get around their neighbourhood.

× No, I haven't.

✓ No, I didn't have one.

问题问的是你小时候是否有自行车，使用一般过去时“Did you have...?”。回答也应使用一般过去时，因此应说“No, I didn't have one.”，而不是现在完成时“No, I haven't.”。回答类似问题时，要让答句的时态与问句保持一致。

× Yes, it's more popular than in my country, because everyone in a child need wants to be one

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because every child wants to have one.

“everyone in a child need wants to be one”结构混乱：“everyone in a child”不能表达“每个孩子”，“need”在这里也多余；可改为“every child wants to have one”（每个孩子都想拥有一辆）。另外，前文的“bikes”是复数，用“they are”或直接重复“bikes are”，不要用单数“it's”。建议先明确句子的主语，再使用结构完整、搭配正确的表达。