Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答问题，避免用“OK, but”或不清楚的“in my image”。注意过去时表达应为“when I was a child”，不要说“in my child”。删去重复的“have a”，并补充一个简短原因或相关细节。

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I usually walked to nearby places with my family.

提案: 开头的“Yes, No”互相矛盾，请选择明确的肯定或否定回答。用“bikes”作复数主语时，后面应使用“they are”；“very, very more and more the mobile”表达不自然。可以说明自行车越来越受欢迎，并补充具体原因，例如方便、环保或适合短途出行。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. They’re becoming more common because they’re convenient for short trips and don’t cause pollution.

× OK, but in my image I think I didn't have a have a bike in my child.

✓ Okay, I think I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

这里的“in my child”介词和表达方式不正确。表示“在我小时候”应说“when I was a child”或“as a child”。另外，“have a have a”是重复表达，修改时删去重复部分。

× Yes, No, I think so. It's very popular in my country. They are very, very more and more the mobile, yeah.

✓ I think so. Bikes are very popular in my country, and they are becoming more and more popular.

“more and more”表示“越来越……”，后面直接接形容词；不能在其前加“very”，也不应在形容词前加定冠词“the”。这里结合前文用“popular”表达“受欢迎”更恰当。