Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你没有回答考官的问题，而是把问题重复成了另一个问题。注意听关键词“bike”和时间表达“when you were a child”，然后直接回答自己小时候有没有自行车。可以先用“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”作答，再补充一条具体信息，例如自行车的颜色或骑车的经历。

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: 回答切题，也提供了共享单车这一具体例子，但“on the street”重复出现，表达略显冗长。可以先明确回答自行车是否受欢迎，再说明共享单车为什么方便。注意说“scan a QR code to unlock a shared bike”；“QR queued”和“borrowed the share bikes”在这里不自然。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in big cities. Many people use shared bikes for short trips because they can scan a QR code to unlock one and ride it wherever they need to go.

× You can scan the QR queued and borrowed the share bikes.

✓ You can scan the QR code and borrow shared bikes.

情态动词 can 后面应接动词原形，因此 borrowed 应改为 borrow。结合语境，“QR queued”应为“QR code”（二维码），“share bikes”可改为“shared bikes”（共享单车），表达更自然。