Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlamanız iyi; ancak devamındaki cümleler anlaşılır değil ve dilbilgisi hataları içeriyor. Bisikleti nasıl edindiğinizi ve sürmeyi nasıl öğrendiğinizi basit, doğru cümlelerle açıklayın. “I learned to ride a bike” ifadesini kullanın; gereksiz duraksamaları ve “uh” tekrarlarını azaltın.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was six. My parents bought it for me, and I learned to ride it in our neighborhood. I was a little nervous at first, but I soon really enjoyed it.

提案: Fikrinizi belirtiyorsunuz ve neden sunmaya çalışıyorsunuz; ancak “more popular than” yerine “more popular than bikes” veya “the most popular” yapısını doğru kullanın. “People wants” yerine “people want”, “get more comfortable” yerine “feel more comfortable” ya da “travel more comfortably” deyin. Bisikletlerin arabalar kadar güvenli veya hızlı olmadığını ifade ederken “not as safe/fast as cars” kalıbını kullanın. Dolgu sözcüklerini azaltıp yanıtı daha akıcı ve kısa tutun.

例: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Cars are more popular because people find them more comfortable, especially for long journeys. Also, bikes are not as fast or as safe as cars on busy roads.

× I guess first I have to how can I get a bike.

✓ I guess the first thing I had to do was learn how to ride a bike.

The speaker is describing childhood, so the past-tense form had to is needed instead of have to. The original also uses an incorrect clause structure; learn how to ride a bike expresses the intended idea clearly.

× Then I studied a bike and uh I understand how get a ride a bike.

✓ Then I studied a bike, and I understood how to ride a bike.

Because the speaker is describing a past experience, understand should be changed to understood. The verb understand is followed by how to plus the base form of a verb, so how to ride is correct.

× Then I studied a bike and uh I understand how get a ride a bike.

✓ Then I studied a bike, and I understood how to ride a bike.

The phrase how get a ride a bike does not form a grammatical clause. Use how to followed by the base verb: how to ride a bike.

× In my country, cars are most popular than uh, bikes

✓ In my country, cars are more popular than bikes.

Use the comparative form more popular with than when comparing two things. Most popular is a superlative and is not used with than.

× people wants to get more comfortable

✓ people want to get more comfortable

People is a plural subject, so it takes the base verb want, not the singular form wants.

× the bike, uh, is uh, not safe, safer than cars and not faster than cars

✓ Bikes are not as safe or as fast as cars.

For a comparison showing that one thing has less of a quality than another, use not as plus the adjective plus as. The original also shifts from the singular bike to comparisons with cars; bikes makes the general comparison clearer.