Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответьте прямо и затем добавьте одну конкретную деталь. Избегайте повторов и заполнителей вроде “uh”. Говорите “when I was a child” и уточните, что именно вам нравилось: кататься на велосипеде, а не сам велосипед был хобби.

例: Yes, I did. I had a big red bike, and I loved riding it around my neighborhood after school.

提案: Сформулируйте полный ответ с правильной связкой: “bikes are popular”. Затем назовите конкретную причину, например доступность велосипедов или удобство поездок. Не начинайте объяснение с “because”, если не продолжаете его.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are an affordable and convenient way to get around, especially in busy cities.

× I had a big, uh, red bike, uh, bike, uh, was my favorite, a favorite, uh, hobby when I was child.

✓ I had a big red bike. It was my favorite hobby when I was a child.

Use the article 'a' before the singular countable noun 'child': 'a child.' The correction also removes spoken repetitions and adds 'It' as the subject of 'was.'

× I believe that in my country bikes popular because.

✓ I believe that bikes are popular in my country.

The adjective 'popular' needs the linking verb 'are' to form a complete clause with the plural subject 'bikes.' The original sentence also stops after 'because' without giving a reason, so the correction removes that unfinished clause.