Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答问题，例如“I did”。注意讲过去的经历要使用过去时：ride应改为rode，have应改为had。避免“often”和“every day”重复表达频率，也不要反复使用“so”。可以补充一个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色或你骑车时做什么。

例: Yes, I did. I had a red bike when I was a child, and I rode it around my neighbourhood almost every day. I especially enjoyed cycling with my friends after school.

提案: 开头的“Yes, I do”回答得很直接，但后续表达有多处难以理解的词语和语法问题。谈论自行车是否受欢迎时，可以说明哪些人会骑车，以及骑车的原因；例如通勤、锻炼或环保。使用清晰的连接词，如“because”和“also”，并避免重复“popular”。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people ride them to work because cycling is convenient and helps them avoid traffic. Others use bikes for exercise or to make short trips.

× When I was a child I often ride my bike every day, so I have bike and my bike is red, so I like my bike.

✓ When I was a child, I often rode my bike every day, so I had a bike, and my bike was red, so I liked my bike.

这段话描述的是“小时候”的经历，时间背景是过去，因此动词应使用过去式：ride 改为 rode，have 改为 had，is 改为 was，like 改为 liked。练习时要留意句子中的过去时间表达，并确保相关动词时态一致。

× When I was a child I often ride my bike every day, so I have bike and my bike is red, so I like my bike.

✓ When I was a child, I often rode my bike every day, so I had a bike, and my bike was red, so I liked my bike.

bike 是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词。此处应说 a bike，而不能直接说 bike。可数名词单数前通常要有 a/an 或 the 等限定词。

× I think the buy in my country is very popular because the popular is very big and some people will try to choose the pub choose their bike to go to the work or doing more exercise.

✓ I think the buy in my country is very popular because the popular is very big and some people will try to choose the pub choose their bike to go to work or doing more exercise.

表示去上班时，固定说法是 go to work，work 前通常不加定冠词 the。注意区分 go to work（去上班）和 go to the workplace（去那个工作场所）。

× I think the buy in my country is very popular because the popular is very big and some people will try to choose the pub choose their bike to go to the work or doing more exercise.

✓ I think the buy in my country is very popular because the popular is very big and some people will try to choose the pub choose their bike to go to work or do more exercise.

to go 和 do more exercise 在 or 两侧并列，应保持结构平行。原句中的 doing 与 to go 不平行，因此改为 do。连接并列成分时，要尽量使用相同的语法形式。