Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question directly about whether you had a bike in the past. Since you say you are still a child, clarify whether you currently have one and briefly explain why or how you use it. Use a natural phrase such as “I’m still a child” rather than “I am a child right now.”

例: I’m still a child, and I have a small bike. I usually ride it in the park near my home with my friends.

提案: Your answer does not clearly respond to the question and is difficult to understand. State your opinion directly, then add a specific reason or example. Use linking words such as “because” or “for example” to connect your ideas.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re an affordable way to get around. For example, many people ride them to school or work, especially in busy cities.

× And should be patient that purpose.

✓ And people should be patient for that purpose.

The sentence is missing a subject before should. Add a subject, such as people, to make it a complete sentence. In this context, the answer may also be clearer if you explain who should be patient and why.

× And should be patient that purpose.

✓ And people should be patient for that purpose.

The phrase should be patient needs the preposition for before that purpose. Use for that purpose to express the reason or goal.