Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答问题，再补充一两个具体细节。注意用“bike”而不是“buyer”；“when I was a child”表示“我小时候”，“at that time”表示“那时候”。过去发生的事情要用过去时，例如“bought”。避免以“and”结束未完成的句子。

例: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child, and I used to ride it to school every day. It was a little old, but it was very convenient.

提案: 先明确回答“是”或“不是”，然后说明哪些人常骑自行车以及原因。使用完整句子，例如“Bikes are popular in my country”和“Many people ride them”。可以补充具体场景或原因；不要加入与问题无关、意思不清楚的句子。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them for short trips, especially in busy cities. They are affordable and can be a convenient way to avoid traffic.

× Yes, I did have a buyer when I was children.

✓ Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child.

主语是“I”，这里说的是一个孩子，因此应使用单数名词“a child”，不能用复数“children”。根据上下文，“buyer”应是想表达“bike”；注意“a”后面要接单数可数名词。

× For that time I buy my bike to go to school and.

✓ At that time, I bought my bike to go to school.

表示“在那个时候”通常说“At that time”，而不是“For that time”。建议记住常见时间表达“At that time”。

× For that time I buy my bike to go to school and.

✓ At that time, I bought my bike to go to school.

句子描述的是童年时发生的事情，应用一般过去时。“buy”的过去式是“bought”，不能使用原形“buy”。回答过去经历时，要确保相关动词都使用过去式。

× For that time I buy my bike to go to school and.

✓ At that time, I bought my bike to go to school.

句末的“and”连接后续内容，但后面没有接完整的并列成分，导致句子结构不完整。若没有其他内容要补充，应删去“and”，并以句号结束。

× Yes, my country. Many people have. Bike.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country. Many people have bikes.

“Yes, my country.”和“Many people have.”都没有表达完整意思：“have”后缺少宾语，“Yes, my country”也缺少说明国家与自行车流行之间关系的谓语。可以将内容组成完整句子，并在“have”后补上宾语。

× Yes, my country. Many people have. Bike.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country. Many people have bikes.

这里泛指很多自行车，应该使用复数“bikes”，而不是单数“bike”。泛指一类可数名词时，通常使用复数形式。

× Do you want person is popular?

✓ Do you mean that bikes are popular?

原句把“Do you want”和“person is popular”不正确地组合在一起，句子结构不成立。结合上下文，可以用“Do you mean that…?”询问对方的意思；“that”后接完整的陈述句。