Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly, then explain what the bike was like or what you did with it. The phrase “for old people” is unclear, and “I used to know” does not fit here. Use “learned to ride a bicycle” rather than “learn how to ride 2 wheels bike,” and finish your answer without trailing off.

例: Yes, I did. It was my first bicycle, and I learned to ride on it when I was quite young. I remember feeling proud when I could finally ride it without help.

提案: Give a clear opinion first, and then explain how bike use has changed. Clarify whether you mean bicycles or motorbikes, since “bike” can refer to either. Use natural expressions such as “the growing use of motorbikes” and “for exercise,” and add a specific example if possible.

例: Yes, bicycles are still fairly popular, although more people use motorbikes for everyday travel now. Some people still cycle to work or ride for exercise, especially in parks and quieter neighborhoods.

× I did have a bike for old. People when I was a child and it was my first bike I used to know, I used to learn how to ride 2 wheels bike on that, but umm.

✓ I did. I had a bike when I was a child. It was my first bike, and I learned to ride a two-wheeled bike on it.

The original answer contains a fragment and an unclear sentence construction, especially around 'for old. People when I was a child.' Separating the ideas into complete sentences makes the meaning clear. Use a complete clause with a subject and a verb, and connect related ideas with a conjunction.

× I did have a bike for old. People when I was a child and it was my first bike I used to know, I used to learn how to ride 2 wheels bike on that, but umm.

✓ I did. I had a bike when I was a child. It was my first bike, and I learned to ride a two-wheeled bike on it.

When a number is used to describe a bike with two wheels, use the compound modifier 'two-wheeled bike' rather than '2 wheels bike.' In compound modifiers before a noun, 'wheel' is not made plural, and 'wheeled' forms the adjective.

× In my country people used to ride the bike a lot, but now with the replacement of motorbike early children use it and some people use bike on their daily physical activities.

✓ In my country, people used to ride bikes a lot, but now, with the replacement of bikes by motorbikes, some people use bikes for their daily physical activities.

Use the plural 'bikes' when speaking generally about bicycles, rather than the singular 'the bike.' The correction also makes the general reference to motorbikes plural. Use plural nouns for items discussed as a category.

× In my country people used to ride the bike a lot, but now with the replacement of motorbike early children use it and some people use bike on their daily physical activities.

✓ In my country, people used to ride bikes a lot, but now, with the replacement of bikes by motorbikes, some people use bikes for their daily physical activities.

Use 'for' to show the purpose of an activity: people use bikes 'for' their physical activities. 'On their physical activities' is not the appropriate preposition in this context.