Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer consistently in the past tense because the question asks about your childhood. Use “I had a bike” rather than “I have a bike,” and say “near my house” instead of “to nearby my house.” Add one specific detail about how or where you rode it.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood, especially on weekends.

提案: Give a clear opening answer, then explain who uses bikes and why. Use “bikes are common” rather than “it’s really common,” and correct “rent a bike to commute.” Avoid repeating words, and finish your sentence with a complete idea.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people own one, while others rent bikes to commute to work because they are convenient and inexpensive.

× Yes, when I was a kid. I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a kid.

The question asks about the past, and when I was a kid also refers to a past time. Use had rather than have to keep the verb tense consistent. A complete answer is Yes, I had a bike when I was a kid.

× I usually ride my bike to nearby my house.

✓ I usually ride my bike near my house.

Nearby already means close to and does not take to in this construction. Use near my house, or say to a place near my house if you mean that you ride to a destination.

× Yes, it's really common on the street.

✓ Yes, bikes are really common on the street.

The question is about bikes, which is plural, so it's does not agree with the subject being discussed. Name the plural subject and use are: Bikes are really common.

× Many people have their bike

✓ Many people have their bikes.

Many people refers to multiple people, so the possessive noun should be plural in this context. Use bikes rather than bike.

× Other people rent rent a bike to commuter to work or.

✓ Other people rent bikes to commute to work.

After to expressing purpose, use the base form of a verb: commute, not the noun commuter. The final or leaves the thought incomplete, so remove it unless you add another alternative. The repeated rent is a speech repetition and is omitted from the polished correction.